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When I got to the part with Gordo smacking the dildo in, I thought, man this is sick, twisted, perverted and disgusting. Keep up the good work.

Well the name Gordo might work...if you are fixed on the fat man mentality its the perfect name it means fat in Spanish...just a thought

That was dirty, wrong, and somewhat sick. I loved it! Story was awesome. But, I think the fat man got Lara pregnant. He never gave her the morning after pills. Lol!

I ussually dont review but since you I asked I will. I have to say Its good to see someone continuing the story. Keep up the good work. I cant help but wonder if Lara will eventually enjoy the things that she endures.

Hi,
I liked this story, although it seems to have come to an end. I was hoping Lara would be kept by the guard as his plaything (he smuggles her home) and that she would end up pregnant.
Maybe she goes after him for revenge and ends up getting caught by him. I would definately like to see some sex with a very pregnant Lara.
The story was well-written, fun. Hope to see more from you.
SailorNemesis

Second part was even better. Excellent work, as usual.

I thought it was better than the orginal. I'm glad that you seem to have found your muse again!