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person Anon
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great fic needs chapter 8
person Jubilee
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great ! More !
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, chapter 7 is hot. Nice to see Lara fighting back, not that it did her much good, lol. I wonder what depravity Gordo will come up with next. Keep up the good work, looking forward to updates.
person Callahan
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good stuff. Although I, in my own way like the pliant Lara, it was very good indeed.

I look foward to see the continuation, and the one of the legends as well. You can count me as a heavy hitter, here o/
person zyid
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
looking forward to more, hope you do that Transformers fic. good luck finding time.
person SoloLogo
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The sexual parts was really hot, and I liked what you've done with the characters. But I feel so sorry for Laura, I hope there's some sort of happy ending. At any rate keep the excellent work.
person Macky
schedule July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi Nice story, but the reason I am writting here is thatyou have offered the author off the "education" sorrt (Final fantasy section, to continue his story, it seems the writer has given up on the story. It would be great if you could pick up on it. I'd be glad to help in anyway I can.

My e-mail is iceboy_16_3@hotmail.com drop me a mail and we can discuss this further.

P.S. I will post thsi as review on every story you have up, increases the chance of you actually getting the message ^^
person Callahan
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Even though I have been an active person in this website for almost an year now, this is the first time I review, reflection of how I liked your fiction. I looked at the original one, and damn, you are good. Very well written, and very comprehensible, since english is not my first language. The twists you add between the lines are beyond excellence, and I give you my congratulations.

Now get your ASS back into the chair and write that next chapter

Cheers, and success, dude o/

Callahan
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ya know, I don't like pain, D/s, rape, etc. for some reason though, I do like this story. Please continue.
person anon
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This series is everything that a dark noncon, BDSM fic should aspire to be- gripping and exciting in a sick, twisted, wrong way.
I simply cannot wait for future installments.