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May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another sick chapter, but after I read it a few more times what then? I NEED MORE!
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story!
Rock on!
Rock on!
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was an original use of an appliance...
Keep it up.
Keep it up.
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April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ugh...
Well, first of all, love the new chapter. Been a while.
But, could you maybe tone down the physical abuse a little? It's starting to be less erotic and more leaning towards snuff..
I liked it better when the torture was more psychological/humiliation oriented, like in the 1st chapter.
Though I could seenthat happening in the next chapter...
Well, first of all, love the new chapter. Been a while.
But, could you maybe tone down the physical abuse a little? It's starting to be less erotic and more leaning towards snuff..
I liked it better when the torture was more psychological/humiliation oriented, like in the 1st chapter.
Though I could seenthat happening in the next chapter...
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April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You think you're the slowest to finish something? I got sonic heroes like 11 months ago and i'm still on grand metropolis.
As for the bust question i would prefer the DD size from legend-thats just me.
As for the bust question i would prefer the DD size from legend-thats just me.
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April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this story!
Update soon please!
Update soon please!
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January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to say its great to see you do a non-angst story. The other three stories of yours were absolutely brilliant, but its nice to see your ability to do different feels of a story. Keep it up. Please.
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Slick, sick, sexy, enormous anticipation.
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
not bad for a remake of that thing although since the first one gave you the impression that Laura gets pregnant will this have that too at one point? Plus I can only imagine what else that guy will think up, maybe have her video taped with a hooker he gets for his amusement, I know you've used animals in your other Laura fic (which I hope you get back to at one point)so will we see any of that as well?
What about what Laura does herself? She has to bascialy screw other people as well.
What about what Laura does herself? She has to bascialy screw other people as well.
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't stop myself from re-reading it... we want more! More! Bring more torture and misery to our heroin, so we can savor her pain!
Keep up the good work, friend
Keep up the good work, friend