AFF Fiction Portal
schedule June 26, 2018 at 12:00 AM

ok this is trash

person Anon
schedule May 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM
WAKE UP!! DUDE! MORE! NOW! By the way... what up?
person VFSNAKE
schedule February 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Mark got some good revenge on Lara.
person Anon
schedule February 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM
So, are you gonna kill one of these fuckers now? Also, Tremaine needs killing, or no clean outcome for her.
person Anon
schedule February 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Solid chapter, not too big on bdsm but you did a good job painting the picture so it was an enjoyable read. Could real feel Lara's desperation to get out the truth to Mark too, but I guess twenty forced orgasms can really take the fight of you :P Looking forward to the next!
person VFSNAKE
schedule February 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Another bit of revenge against Lara. Who is next?
person Anon
schedule January 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Since 2007 and you're still keeping up with this. That's pretty bloody impressive. I haven't read the whole thing, only a few chapters here and there since the material isn't really my sort of thing. Highlights would include the pleasure mobile and the more recent Dig arc. Anyway, just posting this to show your work is being read and enjoyed, even if not so frequently reviewed. Those are hard to come by on this site it seems.
person VFSNAKE
schedule January 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Evan is in his own little world. HA! Lara is in her own that is lot less pleasant.
person anon
schedule October 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Moar spankathons please!
person guest
schedule October 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I was recommended reading this story by a friend and it is the best humiliation story I have read on this site.

The psychological impact of the scenes of rape and torture, humiliation and control are incredibly powerful to both the characters and the readers. I am very impressed that there is a story beneath all the horror in the philosophers stone and subplots with eversts schemes and characters like mark and kitty. I really like kitty by the way she comes across as sexual evil personified.

All sexual scenes are highly original and written with great energy within, the dialogue when dealing with humiliation are powerful and emotional. There is an almost psychotic attention to detail in scenes including machinery or punishment devices which I find very appealing.

I am very eager for more and hoping especially for more lara/kitty as there scenes together are particularly good.