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More. Please?

Quite a nice job mate, good enough to actually make me create an account simply to review it. The descriptors were nigh perfect, I could see the battle from part one playing out in my mind as though it were on a screen. Keep up the good work, I greatly look forward to this tale's conclusion and any future endevors you may have planned.

For being your first story, this is certainly shaping up quite well. The characters are beleivable enough to draw you in, and the action (erotic or not) has enough depth to compliment the calm moments. You've certainly got talent with words, and I really like where this is going. Do continue, please!

This is getting good=D
I really love the mana being sucked from his soul, nice touch

Great first WoW fic! Congratulations!
Please don't let this fic rot, it has a lot of potential.

I don't have any major quarrals with this as it hasn't developed yet. I would however, like a personal background for the major chars.

Thanks, and good luck ^_^