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November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great fic and I hope you update soon, this is really interesting. A good subplot is what if Kika actually does get pregnant. heheheh.
Anyway I would like to see one with Katarina.
Anyway I would like to see one with Katarina.
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April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Silly, daring and great to read. When's the next update?
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March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Don't expect any new chapter anytime soon, because I'll be busy with my new PS3 MWAHAHAHAAHA! Still, I would appreciate comments/reviews, and suggestions. I'll occasionally drop by to see if there are any, because I would take them to mind, and think about implementing them in later chapters. Well, so long for now!
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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very cool story, I like it. There aren't many good Suikoden IV stories.
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March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dude, that's an awesome idea. I'll get started on it right away. Suikoden II is my favorite game, and the babes are just gorgeous. To have Lazlo run amuck in that world will just be cool. Get ready Vicky, I'm going to make your scream! Thanks Millie Lover!!
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March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Do the elf next..
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March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A Suikoden IV story, nice! Suikoden IV is seriously underrated. It's fun and the writing's good, liked chaps 3 and 4 especially. I was hoping for more descriptions of the messy cumshots, esp. with Gretchen and Millay. Kika was done good, but it's weird how Lazlo freaks out about the possible pregnancy. Then again, he is young and inexperienced (until now I guess), so maybe he just needs some teaching from some of the ladies. Yeah.
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March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks! Thanks! Appreciate the review from those who actually reviewed, but god damn dude, if you're just going to say "Do the elf next" I ain't going to do jack-holy-shit for you.
Here's a word up, the next chapter might focus a bit more on plot development, and less on fucking. It's something I've been slowly easing up on, but not really good at. I will try anyway. I can't promise anything though, because my plans usually don't work out, but something else always will.
Seeya bitches!
Here's a word up, the next chapter might focus a bit more on plot development, and less on fucking. It's something I've been slowly easing up on, but not really good at. I will try anyway. I can't promise anything though, because my plans usually don't work out, but something else always will.
Seeya bitches!
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March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Laz is certinely the man in this, there's a 'badass' persona that's just enjoyable to read, the erm 'action' scenes are certinely detailed.
I have one odd suggestion. He can have a great time with Viki that results in him and her flung into the future (afterall viki reacts to anything) and can appear just after suikoden II and before going back to Viki to get him back to his own timeline, he decides to have a little fun while in the future. Lazlo claiming millie perhaps?
I have one odd suggestion. He can have a great time with Viki that results in him and her flung into the future (afterall viki reacts to anything) and can appear just after suikoden II and before going back to Viki to get him back to his own timeline, he decides to have a little fun while in the future. Lazlo claiming millie perhaps?
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What the fuck, someone's interested in Elenor? Mwahahahaha! She certainly doesn't suit my taste, but I think I can write up some comical situations that revolves around her. But, this doesn't mean I will, I'm just going to think about it. Keep the reviews coming though or else I won't know whether you folks want me to continue adding chapters.