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for All Mine

by kairilover69

person No reason reviews
schedule January 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Congrats, we've chosen to do an mp3 read and review of 'All mine/Kairi goes down on ollete.'

http://cosplayconfidential.com/?page_id=60

We were kind of disappointed at how anti-climactic and decidedly un-porny it was. The summary was a little misleading.
person sonicfan
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hellyah!
Try giving them a strap-on, and what if they where to take it outside?
person mexsora
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
makes me want to go lesbian. Almost like watching a movie. puts lesbian porn to shame!
person bloodyblackvalentine
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was really hot, and the way you wrote painted the images so vividly in my mind! btw, I'ma chick ;)
person Random Ambiguity
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yippie! More Yuri fanfics. About time. xD
person Cave
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome.

NOT.

I didn't know Olette was a cow.
person neoqwerty2002
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The only thing in the fic I found to say was this:

"...Udders? ...Moo?"

I am at the same time terribly amused and somewhat deceived that this yuri summoned mental pictures of Kairi and Olette in cow suits instead of the hotness it started off with. It was lovely when I replaced "udders" with "nipples", but until you do the same it arouses laughter instead of the reader.

Still, a very, very good try. And thank you very much for unintentionally giving me the urge to go off and draw Kairi and Olette in cow suits! :D
person Chibi-chan
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, pretty hot, but it could have been longer. I've never heard of KairiXOlette though