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Wonderful, simply excellent. I loved it! It's nice to find such a well-written fic. This is your first lemon, right? A bit of advice. Using technical terms like 'anus' and 'penis' is a little unappealing. It's kinda tricky, but try using less direct words. Other than that, it's an awesome fic. Definitely five stars.

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Beautifully written storry plz continue

Wow, it has been a long time since I've read a good ToS yaoi... This was well written and i thought the plot was brilliant (them sharing the same fate and all). I was skeptical when I read the warnings; there aren't very many Lloyd/Mithos fics out there. However, I truly enjoyed this and hope you to see more chapters soon!

Yay for MithosxLloyd smut! Nicely written and heh, like the idea of the two souls of the game's protagonist and antagonist trapped together, but... the end? Lloyd's not gonna wake up from his nightmare, sigh that it was just a dream... only to find out he's in the woods, stark naked and covered in teeth marks?