rate_review Reviews

That was exceptionally awesome. Beautifully written, full of lovely emotion as well as sex... I loved it. And Bao Dur is possibly my favourite character from that game, which makes it better.

Hi There! I wanted to thank you two for your lovely comments. I'm sorry I didn't sooner; I didn't think to simply add my own "review" until I saw someone else do it in response to their own feedback. I hope you eventually reread the reviews on this story and accept my sincerest thanks.

I loved writing this story and adored Bao Dur when I played the game. I thought it was a shame that he wasn't a romantic choice for the Exile and thought that the way he was portrayed indicated deeper feelings than simply a loyal soldier to his former commander. I thought ultimately Atton was my Exile's destiny, but wanted to find a way that these two rather lonely people could find a way to comfort each other. This story was the result. I've written another based on Atton and Ladria's romance that's posted on Fanfiction.net (a work still in progress) that touches on the events in this one. Bao Dur eventually finds the love of his life and will live happily ever after, I promise!

Anyway, thank you again so much for taking the time to read and review. It means a lot!

Always, LJ

Head and shoulders above most of the work here. Completely in character, completely loveable, completely hot.