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A good quick trip through the events of RE4, with a promising ending. Will their time in Spain turn out to be a relaxing vacation or a continued fight for their lives? I'm dying to find out. Write more.

PLEASE update soon. I'm going insane.
~Brittany Sambrano

Wow... Just.. Wow. I loved it. ^^ I just got done playing Resident Evil 4 and I was disappointed when Leon totally blew off Ashley when she invited him back to her place. Like seriously bummed. I love this chapter. Please update soon. ^^ It's amazing.
~Brittany Sambrano

I just registered to review your awesome Resi 4 Fanfiction! I'm a huge fan of this pairing and this is the best FF I read so far. Excellent work, can't wait for the next chapter!

Nice chapter, I hope you keep this up. :]

It's a decent beginning and well-written. The only nitpick I have is this sentence: "His skin was a mess; scars of every length were slashed across his body from thrown weapons and claws from the larger, fearsome monsters." Scars are formed when the wound has healed, so 'cuts' or 'lacerations' would be the proper term there. Other than that though, I found nothing else. Maybe a few awkward sentences, but nothing that spoiled the reading, and really aren't worth mentioning unless you really want to polish this up. Let me know if you do, and I'll nitpick everything I can find. LOL.

I understand you intended this chapter for flashback purposes, and I thought you handled that well. Giving the gist of it and then a little detail or two that we didn't have in the game. It was a good balance. I liked the little blip at the beginning as well, though, it does sound familiar. Did you get that from anywhere? Or were influenced by something similar? It reminds me of "Speed" for some reason...lol, even though I know it wasn't from that. Look forward to more, when you begin the full story...

Nice opening chapter, I hope you get the next chapter up soon.