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for Deep Blue

by tschofie

person Syrra
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Don't stop now, I want to know what happens! I also think you did a great job working out Kain's motivations, mannerisms, and personality; it's a pleasure to read. I'm looking forward to seeing how all your fics end. :3
person enthalpy
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Solid writing and fairly accurate characterization. Not a silly parody or comedy, despite employing themes frequently used in such. Possibly warning should have been included for non-explicit shota.
person Marianne
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good I liked the story plot and the rest too bad you didn't continue it. When I was reading this fic I was wondering if u'd mind me writing the similiar thing on my own way and of course I'd acclaim that it was yours first