rate_review Reviews

O_O Hellooooo... wow, that's one of the best stories I've read in a good long while. Other than a few tiny punctuation errors, it not only flows well, it actually pulls the reader in. You have very descriptive writing without overdoing it-- sometimes I encounter authors where every other paragraph is nothing more than a block of descriptions. Your story has the perfect balance of dialogue, description, and action (be it fighting, flying, or, well... fucking X3), not to mention the smatterings of humor that are actually FUNNY, unlike the sorry attempts I usually have to suffer through as a reviewer. And... on top of all that, the lemons were so hot I'm surprised my eyes didn't burn holes in the computer screen.

Just to add one last thing I thought you might want to know-- I'd actually been searching for Resident Evil fanfics involving Leon S. Kennedy, NOT Leon from Kingdom Hearts, when "Black and Blue" caught my attention. For once, I'm very glad I went against my original plan and clicked something else. I loved this, and I'm certainly looking forward to reading more of your work!!

Toodles!!

~Firesong (and, yes, I'm an author on here-- if you'd like, go check out my newest story "Windows to the Soul"-- the others I have posted are pretty much crap right now, so please don't read those and think that's the best I can do. If you get a chance, leave a review :) I'd love to know what you think!!)

I loved the concept from the start but the way you put it into action just made me drool. It was lovely and enchanting and well...hot. Thanks so much.

I really wish this wasn't a one shot. I love it. Well written.

There are so few stories out there that revolve around Leon and Sephiroth, I am so glad that I found this one. It was amazingly well written and like other things that I have read by you it drew me in and kept me captive until the end.

Perhaps a sequel?

Glad I found you again :)

Have I mentioned that you are a god?

Wow, your writing is amazing, I've become hooked on your fanfiction, but I really love this pairing.

I have no idea why you're calling that "dubious consent"; Leon stopped complaining way too soon for it to be a really dub-con. That is hawt stuff, the characterization is excellent, and the fight sequence is as breathtaking as the sex scenes. This is without a doubt one of the better male/male fics I've read.

I.

Love.

You.

That fic just made my day. I was JUST about to go to sleep (at like six PM, go figure) and I read that. It's... too good for word to describe.

A work of art, you amazing person.

Brilliant! You are utterly brilliant! I love this fic! It really makes me wish there was a 2nd portion. You wrote Seph perfectly, and Squall as well. Oooo i REALLY wish there was a 2nd part. I'll check your profile now for your other stories. Thankyou! ^,,^