rate_review Reviews

There are very few Vergil/Female fics out there. Thanks for writing one! It was excellent. I hate what those horrid people do to him, making him sleep with Dante of all people.

if you're going to write a mary sue, make it a GOOD mary sue. this is just god awful. is 'Princess Rin' supposed to be a self-insert of yourself? she sucks. so I guess that means you suck as well.

I'm loving the story over all. But Rin, not exactly what I would think would be Vergil's type. But I'm not about to call her Mary Sue. I have a princess-daughter-of-a-goddess OC of my own, so if I did I'd just be a hypocrite. Still, main point being that I love this story of yours. Even if it does make me a bit jealous.

I repeat: Vergil is HIGHLY out of character and that Mary-Sue is horrific.