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person Kitty
schedule October 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM

You totally deserve to be lynched for this !!! I cried my eyes out... :( I'm half serious... I really hope there's more to this story and that it gets comforty soon again instead of staying hurt... amazing writing btw

person Kitty
schedule October 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Will there be more of this? Or is there already? I'd love love love to read more...

schedule July 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

First I would like to say how much I have enjoyed this story. However I find myself unable to finish it as there seems to be a problem with chapter 14. There seem to be chunks of text missing and what there is visible makes no sense. Maybe you can check this out as I hate to leave it unfinished.

person DisturbedCookie
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to say it, this fanfiction is one of the best I've ever read! (and I read way too many for it to be considered healthy -.-') I just love Illidan (how can one not?) and Shayl is just so original! I'll give you a cookie for an update? *wiggles a cookie at Arcadia*

DisturbedCookie
schedule September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
**Sighs** I give you credit for sticking with this story for as long as you did, but you REALLY need a good beta.....A beta worth their salt could help you avoid the cliches and confusions you've fallen into numerous times, and you're VERY close to a Mary-Sue...But don't take this the wrong way...The story HAS potential, it just needs a bit of a hand...
person Nuru
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just when I thought you weren't going to update anymore (for the story wasn't nearly done) you post yet another delightul chapter to read.
Poor Illidan, having to let Shayl go. Is Malfy going to help them get back together? Because, well, they need to get back together... (we need more lemons)
person Twilight
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my heavens an update! I thought you had dropped of the face of the Earth! I love the new chapter.. I could feel the pain in both Illian and Shayl 's heart. I can't wait for the next chapter :)

Twilight Isis of Durotan
(Now have a pally too..Aranela..)
person Raxzje
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A friend of mine told me about this fanfiction. Originaly i thought she had ment illidan/kael'thas. But this is turning about way better! I've never been a real fan of Original characters but you are making me love it! Please keep it up and more smut please! :D
person Twilight
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you updated a little bit! Looking forward to a new chapter! You are going to continue, right?

TwilightIsis of Durotan
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Will...review...when...speech...grah!