rate_review Reviews

This is getting very interesting. You got to continue it. I wanna see what happens next.

You and your angst! Short chap, but quite to the point. Dwingvatt might want to watch out for laser eyes of death here in a few minutes, methinks...

Wow, I've... missed a lot... haven't I? This will... not do. Must... respond!
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KAAAAAAAAAAHN!!!(/Shatner)

Sorry, had to get that out. Alright, now we find out that Inphyy hasn't caused a riot just yet (good thing), and that she just might starve later (bad thing), and is subsequently put to sleep (could have been worse). Now, you won't let her roll over and croak on us, RIGHT?
Then we progress into a bit of mental happy-sqeeness that boils down to angst in both paqrties. Oh, the angst. I'm starting to hate you in a good way for it, it's the kind of emo that doesn't make me want to punch kittens.

Yeah, I can't think of much else to say. Brain is half dead from lack of having a life right now. >_<

Very good. It doesn't matter how long you take on this; I'll love it until the end. Keep up the fantastic work.

I like this story a lot. Very good character development and interaction. Last chapter was a little vague on the time line compared to chapter 6, though it was a repost of the same chapter for a moment.

Very good work, hope your writing mood stays around.

Holy shit, this fic kicks all kinds of ass! Inphyy has to be my favorite character, and giving her this particular role (not just a captive but a socially rehabilitated one) is an idea I think few others would have come up with. Seriously, that has to be the most original thing about the story since nobody else would have made it so appealing and for such a genuine reason. Keep up the good work. I HAVE to read more!

well. there are a few mistakes. could i possible beta for you? i think i would like to, as this is the only n3 story on this whole site. or on fanfiction *besides urs*

o yea. it was also really good. the plot is intriguing. i always thought aspharr would be sorta...ya know. gentle.

Wow this is really well done. I have never play the game.I hope you will keep up the good work.

Oh, so that's where you've been hiding the rest of it... woot.

Almost had me going there for a moment. Everything looked fine and dandy... then Inphyy gets curious and a minor circle of hell breaks loose. And you leave us hanging. Hanging, I say!

Well, at least we've something to look forward to. Patience, yes. Patience.