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for God of Love and War

by Tycho

person Deb.23
schedule March 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Sexy! Okay, the weirdest thing was how can gods have sex for days and have like one orgasm? How did they have sex with mortals? That would be weird, wouldn't it? A mortal would die.. anyway, had fun. Bye for now...
schedule July 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love how the tone of this piece is so over-the-top and full of hyperbole. It's appropriately epic in feel, and pretty erotic to boot. Well done!
schedule March 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Somewhat cheesy, but thats too be expected given the source material if you are to keep things in character. Extremely enjoyable anyway!

Now that Kratos is in the new mortal kombat game, would you consider writing a new story about Kratos' exploits with the women of MK? I'd also be interested to see what plot (if any) you could come up with.
person SeventhBase
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Kratos bagged two virgin goddesses. That's gotta own.
person blacky
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thus began the events that inspired God of War II.

Haha.
person RevanBR
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic.

Everything about it. Great writing, plot... Can't wait for more.
person Fenrir
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOw...thanks for the Athena fic. WOw...that was great. I can't wait to see what comes next. If you need help with any of the goddess or deities ask me and I'll be more than glad to help out. Because I can't stop reading this story. I swear I check everyday just to make sure it's updated or not. Peace out.
person master
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i hope you wil be udating like one where he thakes athena
person Fenrir
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey Love this story much like your DoA one. The language is weird, but I figured that's what they would say so it's okay. Keep updating, it's really good. And can you make a fic about Elliot from DoA...or Jan Lee...thanks :D
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...Wow. I can just imagine Kratos in a pimp outfit now. XD

Talk about PWP, by the way. I should add, though, how I absolutely loved how you wrote each chapter. It...seemed to fit with the conventions of Ancient Greek storytelling. A major plus.

Keep up the great work! I'm sure Zeus is seething right now! XD