errorYou must be logged in to review this story.
schedule
April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good story. But I must point out the most obvious, glaring mistake in your latest chapter: a man with a raging erection - esp. when he is hard enough to penetrate, can't urinate. The plumbing's not that advanced. Even for Gant.
schedule
April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've never been one for rape scenes like this, so I don't think I can really comment. Bleh.
schedule
April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
All I can say for your latest chapter is wow...
schedule
April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
There's nothing here that I can really complain about! You've totally captured the childish innocence of ol' Nick , the smug and sarcastic characterization of Edgeworth is right on the money and Gant is an evil and sexy bastard. I definitely am keeping my eye on this fic and happily await the next chapter.
schedule
April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ZOMG I'M GONNA EFFIN' KILL GANT! XO!!! He's such an evil manipulative sonavabitch! Why can't Phoenix and Miles be happy together? This story makes me so emo, yet it's really funny. An emotional rollacoasta! Haha, oh my, I'm ranting. Pleeeease, keep going with this story. It's...phenominal. To say in the least. :D
schedule
April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely great! Really well-written, complex characters, great storylines...and fantastic smut too! Please write more. Personally I'm shipping for Miles/Phoenix...Phoenix needs a little love here, poor guy.
Usually I ship for Maya/Phoenix, but here, it's got to be Edgeworth and Wright. They're perfect together.
Please write more soon.
Usually I ship for Maya/Phoenix, but here, it's got to be Edgeworth and Wright. They're perfect together.
Please write more soon.
schedule
April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...GAH. You are a mean, cruel person!
I am warming up considerably to your Phoenix. He's adorable in his own perverted, desperate way. (Kama Sutra flash cards? Hee!) And though you didn't actually write it, you referred to my favorite PW pairing - Edgeworth/Gumshoe FTW!
Still, though... That cliffhanger! So evil! Here's hoping you feel inspired enough to get a new chapter out soon.
I am warming up considerably to your Phoenix. He's adorable in his own perverted, desperate way. (Kama Sutra flash cards? Hee!) And though you didn't actually write it, you referred to my favorite PW pairing - Edgeworth/Gumshoe FTW!
Still, though... That cliffhanger! So evil! Here's hoping you feel inspired enough to get a new chapter out soon.
schedule
April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I... -never- expected to be as entertained and fascinated by this series as I am. Your characterization of Edgeworth is stunning and sexy, and Phoenix is a neverending source of amusement and joy. I rather lost count of how many times he made me break out into a fullfaced grin in the last chapter--SO sweet ^^ But it's still Edgeworth that makes this series, and part of me is guiltily hoping to see him just lose it in the face of pleasure, though a significantly greater part of me rejoiced uncontrollably at watching him talk down Gant and kick him out. That was -amazing-. I hope you continue this series, I -really- do. I love this.
schedule
March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This fic has made me realize a couple of things; firstly, that Gant is a cool minor character, but makes for an odd duck when featured prominently. Secondly, obsessive!Phoenix kind of weirds me out, maybe because of how child-like his personality is in-game - I have difficulty wrapping my brain around him doing any kind of striptease and actually comprehending what he's doing.
That said, I'd be lying if I pretended like I wasn't looking forward to the next chapter. Tally-ho!
That said, I'd be lying if I pretended like I wasn't looking forward to the next chapter. Tally-ho!
schedule
March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
... Oh wow, another excellent chapter! And I must say, Phoenix had me cracking up. Very light-hearted in comparison to what the chapter ended with. I can't wait for more; you left us in suspence.