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I doubt there's much point in reviewing at the moment, as I seem to have stumbled upon this story after it died. However, it demands reviewage, so I must review. Holy fucking shit. Okay? Your characterization of Gant... it's chilling. Yes. He's that manipulative. That... deranged. Perfect and excellent. And your Miles and Phoenix... well, I mean, sure, it might be a stretch to envision the real Edgeworth to be that cock-hungry, but I could see his little side-glances and haughty stares. The strip scene with Phoenix made me laugh.

I hope you come back and finish this story. I so want to know what happens. I mean... Gumshoe'll save him, right? He's supposed to come over to the office, someone's got to find them! And Phoenix! Miles promised him they'd be together again (in two weeks >.>) Miles' little uke-hero has to save him! They gotta wash the Gant-piss out of his ass! T_T (What sort of sick bondage porn does Gant watch to have come up with that?! Ewww) I don't think I could even live with Miles having to live like this until the events of the Lana Skye case and Damon gets put away. I rarely rally for the blood of a fictional character, but DAMON MUST DIE!

whooie, this is hawt. you live up to your handle, truly. it's however, depressing to see that you haven't updated in ages, you weren't the first one, either. why do all the good writers suddenly up and disappear? *sniffle*

please come back and update soon. til then, your aff profile will always be among my bookmarks, precious as they come.

Oh God. Please finish this story...

... Geeze. I don't know where to begin, but this is possibly one of my favorite bits of Phoenix Wright fanfiction. I generally hate when someone turns my favorite character in any fandom into a whore, but I just loved how in control Miles was the entire time. I love how powerful a character you allowed him to remain- that scene with the gun! FINALLY. Someone who's bottom/submissive/whatever acting like a MAN for once. I find non-con to be a huge kink for me, but nothing is hotter to me than a strong person, and believe me- you kept Miles beyond hot.

Right now, I want Gant dea,d though. I adore non-consensual sex- BDSM- all that kind of thing a little too much, but he just pisses me off. Maybe it's because I consider Phoenix/Miles to be one of the few pairings I like that actually could truly be in love, even if their fandom doesn't show it. Lust is delicious, as is obsession, but there's no scenario in which I'd pick Gant over Phoenix for Edgeworth if I'm at all concerned with his happiness. Considering how much I adore Miles, I'm very concerned.

Really, awesome story. Awesome fic. I can only hope that Gant will be shot, and Phoenix will be the one to do it. Miles will have his hands full with getting over mental trauma and finding somewhere to put the body.

are you going to update? i really love this story. i want to know when egdeworth is going to be saved!! i get close to tears everytime i read this story. pheonix will kill damion right? plz say he does! Ii want that bastard dead.

I really like the way you describe Edgeworth's thought processes during sex. Please for the love of god write more.

I do like this story and want to know what happens next!! But why aren't the characters referencing anything that happened in the games? I mean if Gant really wanted to get at Edgworth psychologically, he could easily mention things like DL-6 or von Karma, or the allegations of forged evidence mentioned throughout the game...

And on the other side of things, when Edgeworth was going over reasons to go back to Phoenix, he didn't mention once Phoenix's determination to save his life -- twice -- during case 4. :/ I mean I figured that would be one of the bigger reasons to know how much Phoenix cared...

I mean, otherwise, this story's really good. But it just seems so out there that the games never seem to be referenced at all o_O

I hope the next chapter comes soon!! <3

i finished this whole thing and thus far, i think it's fantastic. your style is really different and innovative. i noticed how you phrase things succinctly and yet, still with an air of the poetic. i also really like the contrast between gant's cruelty and wright's goofy tenderness. makes me feel sorry for edgeworth. keep it up. hot stuff and i want some more!
-S&S

WAAAHHH! Poor Miles. T_T But it's such a good fic! KEEP WRITING!

Though that whole pissing in his ass thing was....gross. D: Eeewwwww.... But very effective for degrading someone and whatnot.

....Still gross though. I do wonder what happened to all that pee.

Dude. . . update. . . just update ;)