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for Breathing Is A Necessity

by BringtheHawt

person meru
schedule July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I know this story is a little past asking for reviews by now, but I just wanted to say that you're doing a fucking amazing job, with every emotion and every word of this story. I don't kow how good the chances are of you finishing this, but please, please, PLEASE finish it!

I can't wait to read more of your stuff, thanks for the great story!:3

(MOAR PLEASE!)
person Anon
schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ack! Possibly the worst time to start reading this...what a cliffhanger! Although you have keep me reading till 6am, so I suppose this was the only way I was going to stop and go to bed...

At any rate, very much looking forward to more!
person Netherlady
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
C’mon! It has been over a year since this fic has been last updated O_o don’t tell me that you are abandoning it; not after plenty of reviews and votes. Please, I can’t have enough of this fic; not yet O_O
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing, and well written. Phoenix is so adorable, and Edgey is so beautifully ...well Edgey, I've always hated Gant and I still do but I do love how horribly sick he's portrayed as in this fic. I cannot wait for an update!
person Anon
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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person KK
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's rare when I find a fic that marries dirty, dirty smut with an interesting plot.

Good show. If I were Gant, I would be clapping right now.
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Here's a shout out from the land of the rising sun!
I hated Gant always....but yet I read this story, so there you go.
person xDavyn
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You...you must write more to this fic. So I can sleep at night. Now every time I even think about Gant I start to freak out and have PTSD moments. In a good way, but the bad sort of good way. You know what I mean. Gah.

Davyn must know what happens!
person Googoogajoob
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must say!

I just read all six of your chapters in one go. What I read the desc, I thought "Hey dude, this probably isn't your cup of tea" but your depictions of Edgeworth, Phoenix and yes, the horrible villain Gant pleases me. Is it wrong that all of this seems in character? Have I perhaps been reading too many fanfic, that the only PW that exists in my head is fannon? (Esp. Edgeworth hiding his face in Gants neck)

I DON'T KNOW BUT I LIKE IT.

Please: make some more, alright?
I'm really looking forward to some sort of bitter-sweet ending.

Googoogajoob

PS. I really like your style.
PPS. You win the internet.
PPPS. Please sir and or madam, may I have some more? *IS SHOT*
person crouton
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I know that this hasn't been updated in a while... but please keep going with this story! Please! I need to know what happens next! I love it so far, especially the part where Phoenix was watching the video. That part at the end where Miles is about to turn off the camera... I was actually shedding tears. And now, with the predicament that Miles is in... I'm begging you, please keep writing! Please? ^_^