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June 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I totally love how you have gotten all of the detailing of each event to flow perfectly through each event of each chapter. It is simply brilliant. I actually would love to see what you can do with alternate endings from the sweetness of a Gumshoe/Edgeworth ending to the ominous Gant/Edgeworth ending. this was one of my first fanfics that I read and was dying to know what happened next and now I finally have the chance to read the ending. I loved it but I can't seem to get enough of your writing. please I would love to read more ^^
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August 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you updated! This chappie left me with the warm tinglies lol. I can't tell you how much I love this story and I can not wait for the next chapter. :D
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July 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this amazing work since the beginning, love. It has stuck in my mind more thoroughly than any other. Such an incredible piece of writing, invoking even more incredible believability in its mental imagery. Can't wait to finish it! Oh, wait, yes I can. So long spent reading this lovely story over and over in high anticipation of the next chapter, just to have it end? Almost depressing. I look forward to it, nonetheless. You are a genius author. My applause to you, dear!
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June 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness! When I saw this on top of the "Latest Stories" list in the games section, I thought it was a glitch. I can't even accurately express how elated I was to found out that it wasn't. It has been so long and, I thought this story was dead.
Ended up rereading the whole thing to refresh my memory. It only made reading the new chapters even better (but please don't make wait years for another chapter please LQTM).
Ended up rereading the whole thing to refresh my memory. It only made reading the new chapters even better (but please don't make wait years for another chapter please LQTM).
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January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I know this stopped being updated five years ago - but this is the best fucking piece of fanfiction I have ever read. As a consummate lover of unforgiving whump, I was stunned by how this author managed not only to sate my sadistic bloodlust, but further managed to fulfill my keeping-things-in-character fetish. The Wright and Edgeworth dialogue was spot-motherfucking-on (I have only played the first game and will therefore reserve commentary on Gant). Seriously, I nearly creamed my fucking pants to the characterization alone. None of that "making the victim a personality free whimpering girly-boy" balderdash that happens most times I read a rape-fic. And in addition to that, the rape was gritty, awful and smutastic. Gods! I don't care that there isn't a proper ending to this. My life has been forever brightened by this piece of literary smut. This is one of the most fantastic things to happen to me this year. When I am one-hundred, I will fucking sing praises of this story to my grandchildren (who... granted hopefully will dismiss my incoherent ramblings about the sexual pairings of imaginary lawyers as a symptom of my no-doubt dementia addled brain...)
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July 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Addicting story. I only wish it were finished so that I could see the end result. Being a Gumshoe/Miles fan myself, I enjoyed those little tidbits, and found myself hoping Gumshoe would decide to come early to the appointment and save him. But 6 or so hours is a bit much. Poor Edgeworth. In a way, as much of a cliffhanger as this is, it makes a pretty decent ending. It leaves the aftermath to the reader's imagination, with the climax having been reached. The resolution is left up to the reader. Regardless, I would still love to read more, and hope you finish this eventually, even though it has been years. Brilliant work~ The past several hours I spent reading this just flew by. You kept all of the characters very true to their personalities, which was refreshing to see. You are a very talented writer and I hope to see more from you some day.
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April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, it's a shame that you haven't updated this story in so long. I'd love to see how it all ends. Hopefully you'll decide to continue. I'd certainly be excited.
Tai
Tai
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February 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
O_O
I don't think I've laughed and cried so much just for one fic. This is absolutely awesome, and I wish wish wish you'd continue it...or at least let us know how it ends, if you can't. >_> I feel so bad for Edgeworth, and in love with your Phoenix (cheesy porn music FTW!) and I want Gant to get his comeuppance SO DAMN MUCH...
I don't think I've laughed and cried so much just for one fic. This is absolutely awesome, and I wish wish wish you'd continue it...or at least let us know how it ends, if you can't. >_> I feel so bad for Edgeworth, and in love with your Phoenix (cheesy porn music FTW!) and I want Gant to get his comeuppance SO DAMN MUCH...
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March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
T.T Where's the rest of this story...? it's been almost three years now...i hope you're still around and i hope you've played Investigations (hoping in hopes that you'll be more incline to continue and hopefully finish this)...
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January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have to be honest, when I was looking for a Phoenix Wright story involving Edgeworth, I expected all of them to be truly out of character. Your Edgeworth is perfect. I adore the style you write in and the way you keep his personality so canon is amazing. This story is a thrill ride and I love every moment of it. It's been a while since an update and of all the stories I've read, I'm most anxious for the end of this one. It really is my favorite PW fic and I can't thank you enough for being so kind to share it! Bravo, bravo! Five stars from me!
~MJ
~MJ