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for Vaida's Harem

by WotanAnubis

schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hot...im going to buy this game now ...
person SaraJaye
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hot.
person Streti
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, a new chapter! The image of Serra in her rain-drenched, see-through robe was quite sexy. Was almost expecting her to whip out a TransGender staff, though. Also, can't help wondering about what exactly the others are doing in the church...
person Sara Jaye, not logged in
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This just may have been my favorite chapter so far. Loved your characterization of Serra.
person KuraiD
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would adore to see if you can pull off Ninian, if possible, though admittedly, it will be more for the challenge aspect than the actual "hot" factor... It might be interesting to see it pulled off.

Otherwise, this whole thing is awesome. >_>b Props for mastering so the FE Yuridom.
person zyid
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, nice story you've got going here! I'm looking forward to reading more - I hope that you add Lyn soon, seeing as she's my favorite character. Good luck and keep writing!
person Anon
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was JUST about to write a limstella fic. oh woe is me, and the FE community for being so small here. let's abduct some of the KH fans.

anyway, i don't see any problems here. it was fun to read. you know. fun to read. nuff said.
person God of War
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I must say that the story has been developing quite well indeed. Though personally I prefer the more traditional M/F pairing, your stories have always found a way to pique my interest. I commend you on your abilities, and I applaud your explanation of Vaida's "Uber Spear". Continue the good work.

GoW
person SaraJaye
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Limstella, eh? XD Very nice work, as usual.
person A-non
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your writing and scenarios are generally excellent, but if you're feeling that vocabulary limitations concerning your sex scenes is a hindrance, I would like to recommend Riiki's stories - you might find them to be educational. He accomplishes quite a lot while keeping the words relatively simple:

http://games.adultfanfiction.net/authors.php?no=2450