rate_review Reviews

Wooooow. This story is awesome. I loved it so much. I may not really be into yuri, but the story aspect itself was worth it, and I love Vaida. This fic is probably one of the only AFF stories I've actually read all the way through. 10/10, good sir/madam.

I don't like Yuri at all, but I read this anyway because it's so well done. Good job.

Eeee, I've been waiting so long for the next installment. *hearts* This was a beautiful chapter.

Nice closing!

You're very much welcome. now if memory serves the only girls left to join Vaida's Valkaries, spelling maybe off, are Ninian and Nino. Now remember that if Ninian isn't marrying Eliwood then Ninian is dead. But then again this is your story and if you want, you can take an artistic license with it, but use some sort of believablity. God Speed! Ah, Almost forgot, Nino will probrably more suited to a threesome enviorment to help her learn the ways of the Horizontal Hoedown.

Hahaha, Rebecca was very cute here. XD And you're welcome. Always glad to lend a helping hand. :3

I have to say, this was very well written. I've followed it for some time but only recently created an account. It's impressive alone that you've kept everyone as in-character as you have, but also to have made an eroge fanfiction with a plot. Regarding the issue with Rebecca, I'm actually a fan of Nino/Rebecca pairings, since it seems they spend time together based on their support conversations. To put Vaida with Rebecca, the only plausible idea I have is that Rebecca wanders off hunting and by some manner or other, Vaida either stumbles across her or gets relegated to go and find her. Also, sorry to ask this here, but I'd enjoy a chance to write with you. If you'd like, drop me an email or something - I use most available instant messengers.

Hmm...maybe for the Rebecca chapter, you could have her approach Louise only to end up in a threesome with her and Vaida? That's all I can think of.

Anyway, I liked this chapter. :D It's good to see you up and at it again.

don't worry Wonton. unfortunately there one of the problems that lie is that Rebecca doesn't have many girl suppports that are easy to obtain. but try searching for one. it might provide some information

Very well written, the fact that each piece of smut actually has a reason behind it to actually not be just written porn, but an erotic story with some sembilience of plot. Though I feel dissappointed that your attention span is not great enough to continuously write the story, I have great pleasure in waiting any updates at any time you wish.