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for Unlikely Angel

by Merci

person Vivia
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for answering my reviews!

When I read every new chapter, I think this is the best yet. So chapter 27 is the best yet, it's also my new favourite. Jin and Hwaorang are made for each other! *tears of joy*
Anyway.. ^o^;
Will they stay for long in Yakushima? I like it so much, I don't want them to leave! Specially since darker things awaits them..They're so in character that it's beyond fanfiction, in my opinion. Nice to see the lighter side of Jin. Rarely seen anywhere. More, more! ^-^
You describe everything so vivid, I see mental images of everything. I felt the rain and the smell of the woods, the trees. It's a lovely place.

Yes, Lee and Kazuya are made for each other as well. ^_~ Lee have been my favourite since the days of Tekken 2 back in the olden days. His wardrobe rocks! Yay, the future looks bright for us Lee/ Kazuya lovers!

It would be much appreciated if you send me an e-mail on updates. And no, I don't have a LJ account. Look for my e-mail address on my AFF profile. Thanks!
person Vivia
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter. It doesn't matter it's short, it says so much. I love to read of how they both see each other. Yes, Jin is cute when he thinks of Hwaorang. ^.^
Oh no, the Devil is slowly wakening up..

I totally agree with December! I look for a new chapter every day, refresh and REREAD. Obsess much? Lol ^o^
And I did a search for Yakashima and it looks to be a magical place. *dreams*
Lucky Jin and Hwaorang.
person Vivia
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whee, a new chapter! Hwaorang is so cute when he thinks about Jin. ^_^ It's so exciting to think about how the story will develope. I also like the way you describe the woods, I can see it in my head.
This story is my favourite right now. It's one of the best fanfiction I have ever read.
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
0.0 ::runs off to read again:: That was.... wow. Lol. I loved it. read it over and over. I have become a refresh button whore for this story. Lmao. I love it so much. Poor Hwo, I know how he feels! All those confusing feelings! Awe, I love it. Everytime I read this story over again, it makes me squee inside. Lol. ::hands over... well, something you like:: Here, an offering! ::bows::

Sits and waits patiently for next installment,
~December
person Vivia
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 24 is the best yet! I've read it several times because I really enjoy Jin and Hwaorang's interaction. Also I'm curious over how the devil will react to everything when he wakes up. Poor Jin.. ^_^

Nadia
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Psshh, no need to thank me! lol. I'm here to thank you for this wonderful masterpiece. It's going so well, and I'm glad you have it planned out. Don't be nervous, it's an awesome story and can only get better; plus, I shall read this story to the end. I loved chp24, it was so sweet. I love how Jin is letting his real self show to Hwo and how he's more relaxed around the lovable redhead. I also like the way Hwo is realizing his feelings about Jin and the tension between the two is epic. The plot just keeps sucking me in and I love how you've developed the characters. Oh and gigglesnort on the girlie pants! Lol, omg, I was laughing so hard! Thank you for this chapter and all your hard work on this project.

Anxiously awaiting your next update,
~December
person Vivia
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is such a nice story! I love this pairing and it's so well done. You have a gift for writing.
Nadia
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg, I love you for this fic! I created an account just to review it. It's so awesome and I love the dedication you put into even though the people here are stupid and don't know a good fic when they see it and won't review... I'm so glad you updated! I love this story to pieces. There's so few Hwo/Jin fics out there and I love this cause it actually has a story behind it.

Anxiously awaiting your next update,
~December
person Aiyayooo
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love that this fic is from Hwoarang's POV and that it's done so well! I can feel the tension in the air between them and it gives me goosebumps! Can't wait for the next chapter cause it's getting REALLY REALLY good! Please don't keep us in suspence for much longer...
person Sammei
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Jin! I just want to hug him! He's so sad. ;_; I really liked Jin and Hwoarang's little day out on the town. It was a nice break from angst - well, for the most part, anyway. Heh. Once again, I really like your minor characters! Momo, Inoue, and Nana seem like so much fun. I'm just imagining them and chuckling. Also, I was laughing right along with Hwoarang while picturing Jin talking like that. I like how the a few people seem to think they're together - "take care of him." Haha, oh man. I can't even imagine what will happen next, especially when Jin and Devil discover Hwoarang and Angel are still there. Not that I'm saying that I WANT this to end soon, since it's one of my absolute favorite fics, but do you know about how many chapters you're going to make this? Or do you just write until you get it all down the way you want it to be? I'm just curious, because I'm wondering if you're going to have the climactic "battle to end all battles" soon, and then the subsequent beginning of a relationship between the two.

Great job as always. Eagerly awaiting your next update!