rate_review Reviews

Simply put: I need more!

 

great story. I love Midna's involved in this as much as link.
I hope you'll do more.

Very interesting story. It was quite nice, but too short. I hope you do another one, and make it longer and more detailed. lol

I've gotta say Streti, I love your work. There's no mistake about the content, just amazingly hot sex. I started with your Bellena story and I've read them all now. Keep up the great work!

The only problem is that I just finished Twilight Princess, and it was difficult, cause I couldn't see Midna without thinking about this story! Not a good thing for my focus.

ok... i liked it. i laughed... a lot. but i liked it... ^_-

This makes me wonder what Link did to Ilia before the twilight was lifted, hehe. :-P

I have to agree with Cam, this isn't too bad, its definitely a new idea/execution of just a generic smut story. I like the new spin, yes there is room to improve, but thats just stylistic stuff that comes as you practice writing. And your practicing, thats a 1 up on a lot of writers. I'd say just work on expaning your abilities and continue trying new things. Pushing the barriers between worlds for a little wolf on fish-woman action was a pretty original idea in my opinion. So I'd say good work and keep up with the good work. Practice is what makes even master writers grow stronger too.

Great! Now I just need a few examples.

Hmm...I think the Anon reviewer is being a little harsh on you Streti. I've read your other stories, and frankly you could do a hell of a lot worse. Not only that, but you are doing a Link/Midna on the onset. You pretty much have a "Get Outta Cliche" free card simply because nothing much has been done. Dialogue...alright it was a little simplistic but come on! It is Zelda, the game where none of the characters even freaking talk. You got Midna down, and Link doesn't talk so you don't need to worry about him.

The situation itself...well this was PWP anyways, right? Not really expecting an Epic love story in less than 1000 words. Smut was descriptive enough to be hot and the plot was long enough to make sense. It was fine...although I've seen hotter (actually I think there is only 1 other fic with this pairing on this site...it is hotter >.> ...but it also involves a wolf eating Midna's ass out)

Anon might just be a Yaoi obsessed fangirl who is mad that this wasn't the LinkxZant fic she has been hoping for ever since she beat the game yesturday.

...I was hoping really badly that you'd at least wait a while before writing about this one. Too bad.

I have now read this and many of your other fics. They all seem to follow a theme of stupid background, unattractive actions, and weak or bad wordplay. Not to mention misused pronouns, incredibly horrible sentences, and other general fuckups.

Everyone has a right to creativity, and I bet you really can write good stuff. Just please change your writing style.