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by DeathPenalty

person Anon
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Better grammar and it's a winner.
person Jim
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
pretty good so far can;t wait for more
person hyabusajiraiyarulz
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
2 short but u better continue