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MY GOD!! This is the best work of FANFIC I AHVE EVER SEEN!! You, sir, are a fanfic GOD!! lol, jk. You're pretty good. Can't wait for the next one.

I wonder if this fanfic will include Vector, charmey, and espio?

I find myself unsure of what I want. At times, I root for Shadow to go back to killing people, but at the same time... I also root for him to take the path of redemption. And I still don't understand how Sonadow is possible. I can see that Sonic is forgiving Shadow, but it also looks like Sonic is holding back his anger. Like when Shadow brought up the subject of Amy and his baby, Sonic seemed to hesitate. Chapter 2= 4.5 out of 5. This story is my favorite story on this site. (Aside from Secret Affair of course, which I can't review because I don't have an account here.)

Speaking of which, CrazyIvan: I'll have to comment your fic from here since I can't review due to the latter. All I can say is; WHAT THE FUCK!!!! Rosie O'Donnel? Darth Vader? You're crazy. But I was also laughing my ass off while reading it. Your fic is also enjoyable. I give your fic: 4 out of 5. Keep it up you crazy-ass mother fucker!

I might make an account here just to review... or maybe not. Only time will tell. Ya'll have a nice mother fucking day!

Damn trolls, making me have to put that much more effort to leave a review. Oh well, I could use the excersise. Nice second chapter, spelling and grammar are fine, format well done, the situation awareness usage is a fine touch. I like cheese. You still didn't answer my question, are we gonna see zombies? Perhaps GUN had revived some of its soldiers and officers (with or without Rouge) The way I heard, as long as the brain is intact, you can bring the body back to like via electro shocking stuff. Something like a heart is simple enough to replace. Personaly I'd like to see a zombie invasion, but it's completely to you.
And since my pal Orima isn't a member, I'm gonna gove you his thoughts on it too.

Orima: You scare the shit out of me, you know that? I won't be able to sleep tonight, they're everywhere man, voices, The Man, THEY'RE OUT THERE I TELL YOU!

That's lovely Orima, now it's time for me to say good bye, hopefuly I made no one cry.
Semper phi, carry on...

PS: WHY IS NO ONE REVIEWING MY UPDATED STORY!! >_<***

Alright, well a good start no doubt.
First off, I need to know, are you going to make it an actualy freaky shit-your-pants kinda fic, or an Army of Darkness cheapo laughable horror fic? Also, is there going to be zombies? Personally, I don't think you can go wrong with a few zombies, but don't over do it.
Also, make sure you have continuity, you're doing damn good with that in the ARAAT series, but you can easily miss a beat and end up falling down the stairs.
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Zombie rape....
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Umm... Anyways... That was a, umm... Right...
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Well, for now I have nothing else to say but...
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Semper phi, carry on...

What a wonderful discovery to find on my birthday, a sequel to one of my favorite stories. A very interesting first chapter but only because it raised so many questions and overall thoughts.

~ Dear lord, I'm actually afraid for Amy. It's the Going in Circles chapter all over again, it makes your heart race and a little fear creep up in your chest as you anticipate what might happen--and she wasn't even in the first chapter. lmao. Though I'm very curious as to why Shadow's Shadow wants the baby...

~ There is a human coming to visit, so I'm *assuming* it's Eggman. But now my new question is: why hasn't Sonic come to visit him? From what happened in the last chapter, I know he cares. So what gives?

~ Knuckles involvement in this story interest me and I shall watch it curiously. Though all the characters will. I understand Sonic possibly being able to let by gones be by gones as he was trying to help Shadow but Tails and the others: that's a very curious matter. I know where Knuckles stand will more than likely be and one can only imagine what Amy might be feeling and do. But Tails oddly seemed to take a more Tikal approach despite it all...and now I'm a *little* afraid that might come back to bite him in the ass. But time will tell.

~I won't be one of those that bitch about Shadow still being alive because quite frankly, I'm proud. Anything but "baby following in the same footsteps" was good enough for me because you two seem to have the ability to make crazy, yet enjoyable/original stories (Still in love with Badass Tails Fiction) and I hate to see creative writers go down the 'been there, done that a million times in countless fanfic' route. (And I swear, I won't rant about you know what.)
The warnings alone made me curious enough to want to read the sequel and I have to admit, Shadow's Shadow is quickly becoming one of my favorite bastards. His sarcasm and wit is hilarious.

~ Okay okay, I'm curious as to how exactly this is going to be a Sonadow fiction. Fine. I'll admit it. But more so because the two of you are writing it. I've wondered what it might be like to read one by you guys and now I'll get to find out. Frankly, I'm actually a tad bit excited.

Overall, I'm ready for the story to kick up and for the killing and crazy Shadow to start up again. I look forward to it and any twist and turns it might contain.

Oh and Froggy, I'll give you my yahoo and msn messager name, I just keep forgetting. Sorry about that.

Nice, Shadow lives on! And something tells me that the killing will return, perhaps even worse than before.

Let's see, Amy's got Shadow's baby and he wants to see it. Wonder how that's going to turn out. Chapter 1= 4.5 out of 5. I really enjoyed reading this chapter, but I wish it was a bit longer.

I want to take a guess on who this 'human' visitor is. I'm thinking it's Eggman, am I right? Who else would try to visit Shadow after all he did? None other than Eggman, who probably just wants to use him in another of his 'world domination' schemes.

Besides, what other human characters are there in the Sonic universe? Only a few. And I doubt the visitor is Chris. Chris is such a fan-hated character. Awaiting more, have a nice day!

And here I was all down becasue you killed Shadow in the first story. Whoo, sequels! He seems to be even more insane then ever, making it interesting to how he'll act outside of the prison.

In the first chapter Shadow reminded me of Gollum from the "Lord of the Rings" movies^^
anyway,I liked it and it´s great to see a sequel and Shadow alive

This reminded me of my favorite RPG's (and game in general) slogan. I think you'll like it.

"You can't run from your own shadow. But you damn well better try."