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February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know I haven't reviewed in a while but don't think I forgot about this story. It's very interesting, to say the least. I rather like what you have so far and I greatly enjoy the way you write Eggman. This story, while starting slow, has picked up greatly and I'm once again interested.
That's truely all I can say for now.
That's truely all I can say for now.
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February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm just stopping by to drop a review via author protocal 194. Good chapter, I speed read, but got the jist of it. Nice format no errors, blah blah blah.
Well, gotta run, those exams arn't going to get themselves done!
Well, gotta run, those exams arn't going to get themselves done!
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Shadow being force fed drugs by the G U N staff. That's an all time low, even for them. I hope Sonic gets Shadow the hell outta there. This fic is on my personal favorites list.
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well no shit he's going to do something stupid froggy its fuckin sonic the hedgehog where talking about here.
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good, not anything new, but still nicely well done. Everyone still seems to be in character, and nothing has gone wrong in my eyes. And this time I found no spelling errors, good job! I'm keeping a close eye on this fic.
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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey make a new one i really insterted to know how and when shadow gets out and what amy will do when shadow comes back to her and the baby. how will amy deal with the baby and what about shadow tell me i want to know about this story and will it be a shadamy story
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January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(Or Draconis)
Forgive me for not reviewing the last chapter but you'll be happy to know I joined just so I could review your story.
So I'll break the review into three seperate parts this time:
The Author's Notes on Chapter 2:
Froggy: I know we said Sonadow in the summary, but for people who hate slash, they'll be glad to know that there's surprisingly little Sonadow (or indeed any slash) and quite a lot of plot about how they get there. After all, Shadow did go on a murderous rampage in the last story.
I understand there being a lot of plot (as there needs to be) but if your warnings/summary pretty much imply that there is going to be Slash then how can there not be any SLASH? (Or were you saying there was going to be very little of that too?)
Chapter 2
I'll admit, another reason I haulted in reviewing was because I wanted to see what would happen in Chapter three after reading this chapter. You built up so much suspense in the first chapter and then seemed to all but defuse it in chapter two: we found out that Amy was keeping the baby (which killed Shadow/Shadow's shadow) having to go after it, Sonic was the one that went to see him (even though you mislead us into thinking it was going to be a human)so that technically answered why he 'wasn't' going (he actually was), Shadow's still stuck with G.U.N. and very little in the ways of his smart assed shadow. I was a little disappointed...that is until I read the third chapter...
Chapter 3
I actually felt sorry for Tails in this chapter, espically when Sonic asked him to go visit Shadow, and Amy's anger was to be expected. At least she's planning to have the baby...though Sonic made an excellent point: giving the baby away just to keep from Shadow isn't the brightest of ideas. Though I noticed Knuckles wasn't in this chapter either, to see how he was 'coping' with things. It will definately be interesting to see how he and Sonic react to each other.
I look forward to the next chapter, as I'm interested to see how (and when) Shadow will break out and what that will mean...
Forgive me for not reviewing the last chapter but you'll be happy to know I joined just so I could review your story.
So I'll break the review into three seperate parts this time:
The Author's Notes on Chapter 2:
Froggy: I know we said Sonadow in the summary, but for people who hate slash, they'll be glad to know that there's surprisingly little Sonadow (or indeed any slash) and quite a lot of plot about how they get there. After all, Shadow did go on a murderous rampage in the last story.
I understand there being a lot of plot (as there needs to be) but if your warnings/summary pretty much imply that there is going to be Slash then how can there not be any SLASH? (Or were you saying there was going to be very little of that too?)
Chapter 2
I'll admit, another reason I haulted in reviewing was because I wanted to see what would happen in Chapter three after reading this chapter. You built up so much suspense in the first chapter and then seemed to all but defuse it in chapter two: we found out that Amy was keeping the baby (which killed Shadow/Shadow's shadow) having to go after it, Sonic was the one that went to see him (even though you mislead us into thinking it was going to be a human)so that technically answered why he 'wasn't' going (he actually was), Shadow's still stuck with G.U.N. and very little in the ways of his smart assed shadow. I was a little disappointed...that is until I read the third chapter...
Chapter 3
I actually felt sorry for Tails in this chapter, espically when Sonic asked him to go visit Shadow, and Amy's anger was to be expected. At least she's planning to have the baby...though Sonic made an excellent point: giving the baby away just to keep from Shadow isn't the brightest of ideas. Though I noticed Knuckles wasn't in this chapter either, to see how he was 'coping' with things. It will definately be interesting to see how he and Sonic react to each other.
I look forward to the next chapter, as I'm interested to see how (and when) Shadow will break out and what that will mean...
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January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I noticed a few spelling/punctuation errors this chapter, and that's not a common thing with you. Did you rush this chapter?
Chapter 3= 4.5 out of 5. This is still my second to favorite story here.
I'm done, I'm going to go play Metroid Prime Hunters. It's a badass game, for a DS game at least.
Chapter 3= 4.5 out of 5. This is still my second to favorite story here.
I'm done, I'm going to go play Metroid Prime Hunters. It's a badass game, for a DS game at least.
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January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Update more, damn it!
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January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hurray! I finnaly figured out the thing with the reviews mc doo hicky!! Everyone can now leave their thoughts on my stories! BTW, great job on chapter again.
Ivan out.....
Ivan out.....