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April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think that having lemons of all those listed pairings would spice things up a bit... usually I read different fics depending what mood I'm on because of the certain pairings, and its great to switch it up once in a while, specially like a person like Sora, but thats just me :)
Sora is SUCH a slut... and the slight incest in here in this fic is much kinkier than other incest fics because its believable - the actual RikuSora pairing contrasts to Sora sexing Roxas, which makes the incest all-the-more apparent, and that Roxas acts like more of a big brother to Sora rather than a lover (sorry about me rambling about a side pairing.. I'm a RiSo fan, but a RoSo-obsessed freak XD)
Anyway, looks like Riku's in between a rock and a hard place... can't wait to see his realization unfold XD
Sora is SUCH a slut... and the slight incest in here in this fic is much kinkier than other incest fics because its believable - the actual RikuSora pairing contrasts to Sora sexing Roxas, which makes the incest all-the-more apparent, and that Roxas acts like more of a big brother to Sora rather than a lover (sorry about me rambling about a side pairing.. I'm a RiSo fan, but a RoSo-obsessed freak XD)
Anyway, looks like Riku's in between a rock and a hard place... can't wait to see his realization unfold XD
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April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
haha rikus so cuute
it's hard to find any soraxriku stories these days~
also yours absolutely good!
love the spunk u put in the story~
rikus cute butt cheeks lol
it's hard to find any soraxriku stories these days~
also yours absolutely good!
love the spunk u put in the story~
rikus cute butt cheeks lol
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April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WhOOtt-ness on the pairings.
Ah, Yeah, maybe not essential to plot, but if the plot keeps mutating, go with it--it’ll probably become important later. And yes, this was a lovely “Torture Riku” chapter that was very well worth the read.
However . . . Get A Beta! For the love of the gods get a proofreader. You’re good, don’t get me wrong, but you need a second set of eyes to catch like little plot, grammar, and spelling mistakes.
Still, I love this story, and I’m also on MM.org--where I happen to have you favorited . . . ::Fangirl-grin::
All I want to know now is: Did Riku just bang his head, or did he pass out from shock?
Hope to see more of thiiiiiiiissss. ::Floaty hearts::
Ah, Yeah, maybe not essential to plot, but if the plot keeps mutating, go with it--it’ll probably become important later. And yes, this was a lovely “Torture Riku” chapter that was very well worth the read.
However . . . Get A Beta! For the love of the gods get a proofreader. You’re good, don’t get me wrong, but you need a second set of eyes to catch like little plot, grammar, and spelling mistakes.
Still, I love this story, and I’m also on MM.org--where I happen to have you favorited . . . ::Fangirl-grin::
All I want to know now is: Did Riku just bang his head, or did he pass out from shock?
Hope to see more of thiiiiiiiissss. ::Floaty hearts::
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April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha... Sora is such a cute little whore.
Short, but sweet, as always
Can't wait for more :)
Short, but sweet, as always
Can't wait for more :)
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April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I love it. I hope you continue soon ^_^
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April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great update! Can't wait to see where the story goes!
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April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope "great" isn't insulting, but I really did enjoy this story. And "great" doesn't quite describe how much I do like it, but anyhoo, please write more!
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April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
::Reads chapter.::
::Eats chapter.::
::Grins.::
You keep writing, I’ll keep reading. But if you can, get a beta/proofreader. Other than that, I think this is an interesting character study. I almost wish I could read the original version you had for this--with your OCs. However, what you have here is a very nice patch job. The characters feel . . . . right in the roles they’re playing.
Well, keep up the good work!
::Eats chapter.::
::Grins.::
You keep writing, I’ll keep reading. But if you can, get a beta/proofreader. Other than that, I think this is an interesting character study. I almost wish I could read the original version you had for this--with your OCs. However, what you have here is a very nice patch job. The characters feel . . . . right in the roles they’re playing.
Well, keep up the good work!
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please write more for this?
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The second chappie was great as well! And I couldn't wait to read it, you kept me here waiting ...
Anyway ... th lap dance was awesome ^__^ Sora was shameless and Riku was ... up? Hehe, yes, he was. But it's not enough for the both of them, I mean Riku - he will come back for more because Kairi is just not enough, not after he discovered Sora. And Sora ... he will finally ask himself if it is worth the money. He surely needs it, the money, that's why he is working as a dancer in a gay club, but ... he is going to hate it, right? Or maybe not. I wonder if Riku will be enough for him ...
An interesting chappie and I definitely want to read more.
Anyway ... th lap dance was awesome ^__^ Sora was shameless and Riku was ... up? Hehe, yes, he was. But it's not enough for the both of them, I mean Riku - he will come back for more because Kairi is just not enough, not after he discovered Sora. And Sora ... he will finally ask himself if it is worth the money. He surely needs it, the money, that's why he is working as a dancer in a gay club, but ... he is going to hate it, right? Or maybe not. I wonder if Riku will be enough for him ...
An interesting chappie and I definitely want to read more.