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"ahalrighty then, I'd like to know what you mean that we're all getting it so wrong, what the hell are you talking about woman!" (shakes harely by the neck infrustration, is then hit over the head with multible frying pans, a group of Creavons drag me off)

Vladranov: (sighs) "What he means to say, is that he is confused, and would appreciate an explaination. As for me, I say you still have an excelent format, as well as great spelling, and I hope we can continue to see much more too come."

(struggling with the Creavons) "YOU'VE NOT SEEN THE LAST OF ME!"

Will Midnight be transformed via Chaos Tempest? That thought struck me as I was reading through Mirages testing in the Core. Will Black Doom release the Artificial Chaos-to motivate Gerald to work faster, or perhaps as punishment for not making Shadow the way Doom wants? And, will anything Gerald/Shadow/Mirage and Ashura/Midnight do here and now effect what GUN does to Shadow in the near-present(ARAAT2 era)?? What of Espio?, Mirage seems not to care about him with Midnight on the scenes here. Does GUN wipe Mirages memery of Midnight as punishment for them staying together? And what of the Gizoid, again? Will it be key to the Artificial Chaos breaking free or perhaps Black Dooms overall plan? So many questions. I hope to have gotten atleast one right, or failing that, atleast to have gotten close.

Damnit, sorry bout my offlineness, but I'm finaly back. And Harely, DM, both excelent guesses, but not correct. I'll give you a bit more time and another hint. It can be found at the check out lane of a certain store for kids.

Well I'm always down for some smut, but you could have put in a little story.

i love this novel i say novel cause it is now 66 chaps long. i love sonic and this is the best story i have read

Ah. That made my day. Thank you, for another amazing chapter. Reading your works makes me want to pick up a pencil and put it to paper. So... is Midnight going to turn into Knux via chaos explosion, like what happened to Sonic? Or is Quilla gonna take over and slaughter a few hired G.U.N.s? Tell me if I'm getting warmer?

Well done. [i]Very[/i] well done. I have the feeling, however, that those two are going to get in troble due to the clothing slip.

This time I'll give you credit - you did make a great story, even if it was a ShadAmy fic. But it still pales in comparison to "My Night With You" by NoWhere_Man.

Even though this story will never surpass MNWY, I trust you to try and make it better. Brighten my opinion on this story.

Heard about the Blowjobman ordeal, and may I just say... what an ass. Hell, I'm pretty disastrous myself and I like to pick on people, (hence my name) but I wouldn't do what he did. Everyone's reviews are gone now.

To the topic at hand, wonderful. I think that Mirage's actions will cause a huge change in history. Since she is warning everyone about a huge disaster, that might lead to a change in history. For example, when I read the part where she was warning Sonic to hide and not fight, I think that might lead to Sonic being captured or perhaps even dieing as opposed to him fighting and maintaining the proper history time line.

Now I need to reply to a few people above. First of all, to Pathetic...

I just read NoWhere_Man's story, and... well... it's good, oh, it's very good. I kind of agree with you. I'm having a hard time deciding which one is better, ARAAT or MNWY. Harley, you need to read it, I recommend it to you.

To CrazyIvan; my answer is: a copy of Red Alert 2. Am I right?

Since you don't have a new chapter up I can't give you any new comments, so i'll leave you with this riddle.
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What carries entire navies and armies like toys, but is no bigger than a small child?
I'll give you but one hint, it isn't a fruitcake.