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Well I have four minutes before I have to lose connection again. This is really a pain in the ass you know? No you don't but it doesn't matter, you've got motivation to get your story updated, ands you do that.
Thius chapter was great, the likeness to the actual stage was fairly well done. Although, you forgot to put in those chaos monsters. Anyways, this chapter was great, not a whole lot of exlosions, no sex, but it's something we can deal with. Great spelling and format as per usual. Nothing more to say from me.

This is CrazyIvan, reminding you to always cut away from yourself when using a blade.
Semper phi, carry on...

Sex is nice.
Quite nice story.
Sex nicer.
Read next time.
Hope it nice.
Have nice time.

I have to say I thought this chapter was the best yet. That is not exactly a hard thing to do. The fourth enstalment of ARAAT is not quite as fun to read as the first three storys. I am not flaming you so please don't take this personal but this story up till the last two capters has realy kind of lagged on and not gone anywhere. Anyway thanks for listening to me ramble, I'm sick with a fever and chills. It sucks balls.

Interesting but I dont think that is the way Shadow should be. I mean he comes out of his tube a badass. Come on thats not vere realistic. I mean in all the games when it flashes back to Shadow on the ark he is kind of un aware of his powers. You know think about it, Shadow wathes Maria die and there is nothing he can do. This Shadow being a badass from the get go kind of dosen't make any sense.

omg... you are my heroes, please comment on my fanfic, i was inspired to write because of you, this is positively the best fanfic in existance. my fanfic : http://z8.invisionfree.com/sonic_spin/index.php?showforum=8

"It is Windows 3000. How am I supposed to mess it up any worse than it already is?"

XD. I couldn't help but point this out. Windows sucks, and I would know, my computer runs on it. I've had so many crashes, it's not even funny. If only I had more money...

Anyway, so far so good. I'll be back on the next update... if I can that is.

HUZZAA!!
Finaly I can be lazy again!
Oh well, nice chapter here, as always great format, good spelling, no detectable errors. The action and suspense are still as great as the day the first ARAAT came out, and I'm still looking forward to the series completion.

For now this is CrazyIvan, ramblin on down the line.

This fic is hard. Bring more in.

This is the best piece of work ever! It's me again, telling you that you have something here. It would be great to publish it in it's own book, but that would be going a little too far, dont'cha think? Anyway, good luck with the chapters in the near future.

I just have to say this, you are one of my insperations.

I recently began writing my own fanfiction, which I have submitted to several sites, this one included. I was amazed at the sheer briliant quality of your stories, and all of the plot twists and storylines and just... everything.

When I review stories, I've always done my best to offer constructive critisism for everything I review, but as time went on, I've found it harder and harder to do that for people. But I will say this for you, despite how corny this sounds... No matter how good you are, you can always get better.

"Only a mediocre writer is always at his best." W. Somerset Maugham

Another reason I was inspired to write was due to all of the crappy work that people have posted, wether here or on Sonadow, or on Fanfiction.net, there's ALOT of bad fanfiction. I'm a writer, I've wrote several books, (They're... umm, not published yet...) and I was determined to show what I can do, I wanted people to see that I can stand all the mediocore pieces that flood Sonic The Hedgehog fandom.

While I know my story is still far from reaching your level, I'm not going to give up, and while it may take a very, very long time, (I've been stuck on chapter 4 for a month, and I have like, 500 words done...) I'll get it done, I've got most of everything else planned out, I'm just hitting a roadblock on 4...

Another thing I love about your work is your ability to make original charecters, to develop them as their own and to have people care about them, they care about what happens to them, and they want to know more about them, and what they do.

My work has many of my own charecters, people I made up that, in truth, have nothing to do with Sonic The Hedgehog, but I applied them for that purpose. I want people to be able to connect with them, I want my audiance to care about what happens, I want to be able to display emotion in my work. I want people to "feel" the story, for people to feel what the charecters feel, and to understand why they do they things they do.

But, I'm rambling, and I've said what I wanted to say, and I really should get out of your hair. I just wanted you to know that I admire your work, you're the kind of person who makes me want to work my ass off, and submit a chapter that will blow away (no pun intended) the readers.

But, I have things I need to do, I have to train for ROTC, get strait A's, work on my Halo 2 machinema, write the scripts for said machinema, read my books, learn marching drills, and between all of this try to write my story...

So, I'm a little swamped, heh heh.

Anyway, thanks for reading through this piece of drabble, I'm sorry I couldn't offer anything useful for you, I just wanted you to know everything you've done for me.

Thank you, and keep up the good work.