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Well, Mirage in Chapter 20 is WRONG totally! Frankly, ANYONE who would take a child from it's mother without reason (like they thought the child was in danger) is a monster and should be destroyed.

Usually, I am very forgiving of other people's faults and bad acts, but this is ONE INSTANCE where I have to draw the line. Midnight was right, the GUN soldiers deserved everything that they got.

Awesome,I'm guessing that Knuckles is Mirage and Midnights child,you really do twist shit up eh Harley?

Nice Jurassic Park 3 quote thrown in there at the end too.

And Knuckles was born!
Eh uh...Does this explain why he wears the gloves? To hide the claws?

Well spank you very much, I at least appreciate the agknowlegement. And you have a point, I don't know how I didn't catch that thing between Sonic and Sally. Oh well.

This is CrazyIvan, signing off for now, Semper phi, carry on...

Well that was interesting. I think Mirage overeacted just a bit, mostly because if she were high on demerol witch is the drug they would give you if you had been shot. She wouldent give a d**m about what was going on around her. But that was just a thought running through my head.

On the note of Mirage complaints I dont see any reason too. I maen she is the only and I do mean only original char that I kind of like. On that note I will say this the story started out as a Shadow Amy fic and I ask you not to forget that in your mad original char ravings.

X.X

Oh now that is just plain mean!

"Not counting that person who complained Mirage should not be able to get pregnant with Midnight."

Come on now, that is just, sheesh, you wouldn't even mention me by name? You know, I've been with you from the first ARAAT and I never once had any beef with you, infact, I loved all of them. But the first time I bring up a scientific princible, you totally disown me. I feel so sad right now....

Actualy, no I don't, I don't really care about that, infact, I'm glad you violated the laws of science, that makes the story so much more interesting. Also, I don't really care about what people think of me, that just isn't something that bothers me.

Now then, this last chapter was another good one, and I can see it is nearing the end of the story. Now that makes me wonder, will the timeline be set right in this story, or are you planning on doing that in ARAAT5? Because personaly, I see alot of loose ends that could be tied up through another sequal, but that's just my opinion, I'm not Dennis Miller, so I can't be wrong. Anyways, I'll be looking forward to the exciting conclusion to ARAAT4, hoepfully it will live up to the expectations everyone has in you, because if it doesn't...

Well, let's just say you might want to vacate the country for a few months while the vicsious mob settles down.

For now, this is CrazyIvan, giving you the answer to the riddle I set forth long ago.

The answer is, a plastic bag from toys'r'us, by entire armies and navies I meant those plastic soldiers, and by smaller than a child, well, bags usualy are smaller than a child.

Semper phi, carry on...

Well bloody hell... One wonders what Mirage will make of Knuckles after this. Assuming she remembers him, memory wipes occur. And assuming she actually makes it out of this.

Although it comes to mind that, how do you explain Knuckles visions/memories of the Chaos incident? Midnight may have some, but last I checked kids don't get their parents memories. And isn't Knuckles meant to have super-strength? Last I checked, neither Mirage nor Midnight were amazingly srong. Mirage might have displayed acts of great strength before but... Not on Knuckles' level.

Amazing chapter, but I don't think the idea was *that* well planned out.

Wow, that was definately something magical. Well, not really but hey, what do I know?
A hell of alot apparently, but that's not important right now.
No, the important thing is, the story and how I shall leave this review. Most of the chapters have been good, great spelling, great format, great writing. That coninues to be the case, however, there are a few things I find a bit not up to par.

Number one, Mirage pregnant from Midnight? Well, unfortunatly we have a very large problem here. The fact that she is mostly feline, and he is mostly echidnia gives you the fact that this is wrong. Besides them not being the same species, they're not even the same genus. Felines are mammals, echidinas are marsupials, although, a marsupial is a sub set of the mammal genus, so okay then. This leads to the fact that the seed would not take to the egg, one, and even if it did, there would have been something fucked up. Marsupial reproductive genes are different from standard mammals, that is why they lay eggs instead of giving birth live. The rest of the mammal genus is geneticaly structured for live birth.

That's basicly the main idea I'm trying to give you here, and since that took up so much time, I'm going to let the other few things drop.

So untill the next time we meet again, this is CrazyIvan signing off, semper phi, carry on...

Coreman! Er, Medic! Lol, that was great, I was wondering when someone was going to do that, I myself have it used comedicaly, but I digress. Another good chapter, spelling format a-okay. WEll, nothing else to say but, semper phi carry on...

Well, I finally got my net back on line, so I'm up again. Hurray. A chapter chalk full of sex to tide the auidiance over eh? Well, I suppose it will have to do.

Also, on a side note, how did I remind you of cutting frozen bread?!