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August 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wait, if Mirrage was made as a secret 'latch key' against Shadow, should GUN, or some other force turn him evil, why the hell is she out in the open as comon knowledge to scientists other than Gerald? You have a serious loophole here.
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March 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is the best story I have read in months, I think that so far these are going well and you should keep going atleast until ARAAT 20, I also think that you should publish them into a book
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April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this might sound stupid but it's my first time reading part four, why dose it seem like there's something missing before chapter one?
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September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter. It really got me thinking and I definately want to read more. But for now, I think I'll take a break from this story since I read two or three of these chappie's already.
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September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Was that character really Sonic or not? I must find out!^_^
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September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man... Ashura is such a jerk. Curse him and his mind control!>.< But anyway... Great story you guys have so far.;)
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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
An excellent tie-up ending, nicely done. Of course, it's ot like only TWO things have changed... The letter, Midnights stasis (although technically, we never saw him, alive OR dead, in the previous one), Mirage's memories...Yah.
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DAMN IT, I liked Midnight. =(
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
While I'm all for teary, emotional last moments, did I read that wrong or did they have it in full view of the mech? Actually, even if they had it in the convenaintly placed hallway- What the HELL was that mech doing? Polishing it's missiles? Why didn't it just step up to the hallway, or circumvent whatever other cover there was and riddle the pair with bullets?
Other than that, a damnably fine chapter.
Other than that, a damnably fine chapter.
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
There were two stasis pods in the lab. One had Ashura in it, just like she remembered. The other was empty, waiting for Gerald, or Maria…
She set the co-ordinates for the occupied pod, and ejected it, walking over to the window to watch it head towards the sun.
“Am I close to your heart now, fucker?” she spat.
XD. That part was hilarious. That pansy Ashura finally got what he deserved.
;_; But the rest of the chapter was terribly sad. Full of gore too. This is probably ARAAT4's best chapter. 4.5 out of 5. Awaiting the Epilogue.
She set the co-ordinates for the occupied pod, and ejected it, walking over to the window to watch it head towards the sun.
“Am I close to your heart now, fucker?” she spat.
XD. That part was hilarious. That pansy Ashura finally got what he deserved.
;_; But the rest of the chapter was terribly sad. Full of gore too. This is probably ARAAT4's best chapter. 4.5 out of 5. Awaiting the Epilogue.