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April 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap this was ten times hotter than i thought it would be. this is going to be one hell of a long review, so here it goes.
Chapter 1) Loved putting Tira up against Talim, good opening match. i found the 'fight' hot and sexy and supported the shower scene as well. I also like the idea of Talim and Xiangua as girlfriends.
Chapter 2) I Love taki, she's my fave. Bonus points for exposing her breasts so quickly and i laughed at how she just cut all of Xiangua's clothes off at once. The way Talim cheered up Xiangua afterwards was super cute and i loved it also.
Chapter 3) Cassandra x Sophitia = Win. Those two are one of my favorite pairings and i'm actually planning on doing a one-shot of them that might turn into a yuri story (like the oneshots i'm doing now for Pokemon). Over all the sisterly love was pure sexyness and i loved the sudden death match they went into.
Chapter 4)Interesting pairing with those two. I never thought of it. I loved how Seong Mi-na licked her own cum from Setsuka's chest. Yummy!
Chapter 5) I love how easy it is to strip Ivy since she's pretty much naked most of the time anyway. I also liked the bit about Talim and Xiangua "wearing nothing but a pair of smiles". that's good writing right there.
Chapter 6) Yet another good pairing. Sophitia is my second favorite character so putting her with Taki is just awesome to me. I loved how Taki keeps using the shredded clothing for bondage. I thought that the end where Cassandra and Sophitia use the strap-on on each other was super sexy and cute. this easily is my favorite chapter.
Chapter 7)Pretty nice chapter. Seong Mi-na and Tira make a cute couple too. Loved Talim wanting to be kinky, so cute! I see some definite potential with her and Xiangua as a pairing now more than ever.
Chapter 8) Short but really sexy. Taki is so freaking hot i can barely stand it.
Chapter 9) Nice ending, i kind of saw it coming though. i laughed about Soul Edge being stolen. this story was just awesome and super sexy too. i enjoyed reading it and regret not having read it sooner.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness
Chapter 1) Loved putting Tira up against Talim, good opening match. i found the 'fight' hot and sexy and supported the shower scene as well. I also like the idea of Talim and Xiangua as girlfriends.
Chapter 2) I Love taki, she's my fave. Bonus points for exposing her breasts so quickly and i laughed at how she just cut all of Xiangua's clothes off at once. The way Talim cheered up Xiangua afterwards was super cute and i loved it also.
Chapter 3) Cassandra x Sophitia = Win. Those two are one of my favorite pairings and i'm actually planning on doing a one-shot of them that might turn into a yuri story (like the oneshots i'm doing now for Pokemon). Over all the sisterly love was pure sexyness and i loved the sudden death match they went into.
Chapter 4)Interesting pairing with those two. I never thought of it. I loved how Seong Mi-na licked her own cum from Setsuka's chest. Yummy!
Chapter 5) I love how easy it is to strip Ivy since she's pretty much naked most of the time anyway. I also liked the bit about Talim and Xiangua "wearing nothing but a pair of smiles". that's good writing right there.
Chapter 6) Yet another good pairing. Sophitia is my second favorite character so putting her with Taki is just awesome to me. I loved how Taki keeps using the shredded clothing for bondage. I thought that the end where Cassandra and Sophitia use the strap-on on each other was super sexy and cute. this easily is my favorite chapter.
Chapter 7)Pretty nice chapter. Seong Mi-na and Tira make a cute couple too. Loved Talim wanting to be kinky, so cute! I see some definite potential with her and Xiangua as a pairing now more than ever.
Chapter 8) Short but really sexy. Taki is so freaking hot i can barely stand it.
Chapter 9) Nice ending, i kind of saw it coming though. i laughed about Soul Edge being stolen. this story was just awesome and super sexy too. i enjoyed reading it and regret not having read it sooner.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness
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August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent series! I really am a fan of sexfighting, especially when it's nice and sexy and well done like this, great job! My one note to you on this otherwise perfectly delicious storyline is that if you ever have time to do any other fics or you come back and update these, more detail could definitely be needed (especially on a few of the stories, by your own admission too).
But then again, with such great subject matter and being so well done, a few details here and there is definitely no big deal; it just means more for those of us with wonderfully dirty little minds to fill in. *evil grin*
But then again, with such great subject matter and being so well done, a few details here and there is definitely no big deal; it just means more for those of us with wonderfully dirty little minds to fill in. *evil grin*
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Best lemon I've ever read, no shit!
You should write another one - rematch :)
More ivy wouldnt hurt as well
You should write another one - rematch :)
More ivy wouldnt hurt as well
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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is pure genius. ^^
Best lemon on this whole site!
Best lemon on this whole site!
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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
scenes for Setsuka is too short...
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December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You fanfics are always fun and hot. Can't wait to see more chapters of this as they come. I just hope you don't have much of Ivy...she's less attractive and feminine than VOLDO is.
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December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this. is the best. idea. ever.
just do some chapters without feet too, okay? some of us arent really into that all the time
just do some chapters without feet too, okay? some of us arent really into that all the time