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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That just kinda sucked. Edgy and dark just for the sake of being edgy and dark, and not even horribly "edgy" at that. The whole thing came across as tremedously shallw, and considering the majority of this sight is nothing but wank fodder as it is, that's really saying something about it.
Technically you have some good writting skill, but there doesn't seem to be a lick of thought put into place in regards to characters or story, not even your oh-so-origina-seen-him-a-thousand-times-before Original Character.
Technically you have some good writting skill, but there doesn't seem to be a lick of thought put into place in regards to characters or story, not even your oh-so-origina-seen-him-a-thousand-times-before Original Character.
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you have issues
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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I read stuff like this to scare myself. Both at the horror of its content, and my own ability to continue reading from start to finish...
I hate your guts for what you've done to me. I'd tell you to rot in hell, but there is no such place, no heaven either... You sick son of a bitch... Keep up the good work... I think I'll go shiver myself to sleep and hope I don't remember reading this.
But I wonder three things, what reason did you have, if any, to write this? What kind of guts does it take to reach that far down into the abyss to pull stuff like this out? And how far down does it take?
I hate your guts for what you've done to me. I'd tell you to rot in hell, but there is no such place, no heaven either... You sick son of a bitch... Keep up the good work... I think I'll go shiver myself to sleep and hope I don't remember reading this.
But I wonder three things, what reason did you have, if any, to write this? What kind of guts does it take to reach that far down into the abyss to pull stuff like this out? And how far down does it take?
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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Um, haha, I think I'm kinda getting some mixed messages here. You liked it? XD
In response to your questions:
a) I find these kind of extreme violence scenarios very sexy, but I think a lot of the stuff out there on the subject is pretty shallow. I wanted, with this and with any of my other stuff you may have read, to add a little depth of character and meaning to the subject without necessarily hampering the sexiness (for those who find such things interesting).
b) I don't know. You'd be surprised how run of the mill this stuff is for me, because IMO as long as it doesn't do any damage in reality it's fair game. I got over feeling guilty about fantasies a LONG time ago, around the same time I stopped feeling guilty for beating off.
c) I guess I answered this in b. What's difficult isn't dredging up my own darkness and weirdness, but imagining alternate motivations, and putting into words the often confliction feelings I find. For me, attraction can simultaneously border on worship and bloodlust at the same time. I don't want to get too deep into it here, but yeah.
Thanks for posting a review, I hope I could answer your questions satisfactorily.
In response to your questions:
a) I find these kind of extreme violence scenarios very sexy, but I think a lot of the stuff out there on the subject is pretty shallow. I wanted, with this and with any of my other stuff you may have read, to add a little depth of character and meaning to the subject without necessarily hampering the sexiness (for those who find such things interesting).
b) I don't know. You'd be surprised how run of the mill this stuff is for me, because IMO as long as it doesn't do any damage in reality it's fair game. I got over feeling guilty about fantasies a LONG time ago, around the same time I stopped feeling guilty for beating off.
c) I guess I answered this in b. What's difficult isn't dredging up my own darkness and weirdness, but imagining alternate motivations, and putting into words the often confliction feelings I find. For me, attraction can simultaneously border on worship and bloodlust at the same time. I don't want to get too deep into it here, but yeah.
Thanks for posting a review, I hope I could answer your questions satisfactorily.