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person Anon
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good story 9/10
person Nobodys_Heartless
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sexy :D

I like how the story fit their personalities too xD They were in character and it's rather hard to keep someone in character in Lemon fiction

I can't wait for the next chapter ^^ Please update it soon!
person OmegaX
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent portrayal of Rozy's dominating personality. Please say that you plan on continuing the story at some point.

Great work so far




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person Silenteye
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
May I say something about that? Remember that Adells parents were humans when they were living in Veldime then reverted back to demons when the fake Zenon came. So it's highly possible that he has normal human ears. Also Don't diss the hair! It's like dissing the tie an you don't diss the tie!
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this pair, and I was waiting for some good writer to make a smutty fic about them.

It's well written and I love it! Write more of the two, please.

Again, good job!
person XII: The Hanged Man
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
frist 2 comment. nice story u got really i love it when u make rozy slap adell i can see him starting 2 like it in the future which could fit into the bondage theme u mentioned at the end but its not my place 2 tell others how 2 right their fics so keep up the good work. The Hanged Man has spoken.