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for "Adventure"

by HondoOokami

person Zack
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice work
r u going to go through the story or speed it up to convient spots
person texhnoholio
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
kinky but very arousing

wow
person Anon
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol
person Ordona
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pretty nice. Can't wait for another =D
person dragonman
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome!!!! A TP story! love the game and the story so far! Give me more!
person Fairycat
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. Very well written
person Imsyder
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Probably the best thing I saw on this site in a long while. Update soon won't you?
person Gi
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry i meant to write Ilia and Luda not Alia and Luta.
person sad mofo
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know, I wasn't expecting these things to be good because usually they aren't...but man, this was! Awesome job and I hope you continue soon!
person Leigh
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
TOTAL AWESOMENESS !!! I'm glad I'm not the only one who thought about Link and Uli gettin it on. ^__^ Though my prefered pairing is Link and Ilia.... but this story rocked and I loved it.