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by HondoOokami

person dandan
schedule January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh yeh, I forgot.

"ahem"

never thought somebody would use Uli for some good anal smex X3 good one! XD

Also, for Rutela, how about her entering Link's dreams or something.
person Leigh
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I read chapter 2 and i gotta be honest... it was a big let down, I felt so dissapointed. I loved the Link/Uli parts... I was even hoping for some Link/Ilia in the next... but Luda... dude, that chick is ugly... couldn't you have at least made it Beth... or even Midna ? But Luda... not cool, man... not cool.
person linkage
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far, you're doing a really good job! Hope you write more soon!
You should do one with Beth! It's pretty obvious she has a crush on Link! Also, why not Telma? She's always winking at Link and seems to be kind of flirty with him.
person sad mofo
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the ending, man. A devil indeed. As for pairings, whoa, why not Ilia? :)
person angelface
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it keep up the good work.. but can you maybe do the ilia/link one a little sooner?
person hyabusajiraiyarulz
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damnations .......... no comments 2 good..........
person sr
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty much one of the best Zelda stories on this site.

As for the subject on who Link will do: why not Ashei? she seems a lot more appropriate then Luda or the stargirls...(Incase you don't remember she's that chinese freedom fighter with a rapier).

Solo with Zelda or Ilia seem good too(there's plenty of moments).
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oo, hello everyone! Thanks for the reviews.

When I listed the pairings, I completley forgot about some of them...so i will do a Ilia solo w/Link in maybe a couple of chapters time, and a short Ashei chapter (thanks to reviewer sr, I DID forget who she was). Because in the game Link only meets Zelda once in his human form (I'm not going to do anything with wolf link) I'm leaving her to the end.

Ta very much!
person Omega13
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good to hear that this will be going somewhere and I would have never thought of using the Shaman's daughter.

Although I cannot recall her name, what about that chick in armor that gives you your tips in the mountains. The only female member of that swordsman's secret society that meets in Telma's bar. Considering that no-nonsense attitude, perhaps she would be one for Link to target, or if not, at least mention the sting of the cold shoulder after all his previous encounters.
person bytbyt
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol looks like I wasn't the only one who thoguth of Link having an affair with whats her name