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I really like your Zelda stories. I hope there'll be a chapter with Agitha as well?

Kinky. So Rusle doesn't expect anything huh? odd...
You mention that you thought Beth was only 8, well she is actuall 10 or 11, I have the game guide so i know, and i would like to see her get some.

awesome I luvs it

Just read all three chapters and found them to be very well written, I hope you do not give up on this fic. I look forward to your next update.

Nice one. I wish you keep this stories updated.

I hope you keep up with this story...it's good and has the potential for quite a number of girls to star in it, heh. Maybe Link will demand a little more from Agitha than a wallet for that last golden bug, eh? XD

*blushes and giggles like a schoolgirl* My, our little hero is quite the village bicycle, isn't he?

nce again, it was pretty good X3 Loved the mood of the whole thing, especially the begining. Very detailed and stuffs "nodnod" as always, da smex scenes were great, variety ish always a good stuff, glad to see you don't repeat what you already did (not saying it'd be bad, just saying variety ish good X3)

and the last part was pure comedy X3 you really got Midna's personality right XD

and yay! you may write one with mah suggestion X3 hee hee, Link tricking a poor innocent girl into thinking they are lovers? That's baaaad X3

Nice story! Now it at least seems there will be plenty of chances for new Links in the coming generations... It's interesting to see how many people have thought of the Link/Uli pairing, I guess it is pretty strongly implied in the game. What I didn't think of was the shaman's daughter... actually, I thought she/he was a boy, and I'm still not sure. But despite this, Chap 2 was well written and a hot read. The Midna interaction in Chap 2 was funny and true to her character at the same time. Also, I definitely second (third, fourth?) the suggestion for Ashei if you're so inclined, she's cute and sexy in a standout way. Lastly, I'd like to see more cumshots and more details about them and dripping creampies and so on, but I guess you already know this if you've read any of my stories. :P

DX that was so wrong! She was just a- who I'm kidding, this was pretty good! XD
The "Wrong doing the Wild thing" just cracked me up so much XD good one "nodnod"

I liked the way you showed the whole thing, and I liked Luda's "dispossition" (or whatever you call/spell it) after riding Link. poor girl, totally drained. Rough Link was great >3

Now, here's a lil help for ya. The three girls of the Castle Town are named Kili, Hanna and Misha (red, blue and green I think). Hope that helps for future chaptie. It's gonna be interesting seeing what you pull off with those three >3

Oh, and now that I talked about future chapties. You know, Luda should appear a second time for a threesome along with Beth. After helping Ilia and Telma bring Ralis to Kakariko, you have the perfect excuse, I mean, oportunity to put Link banging these two. I'm sure Luda would boast with Beth about her night of fun X3

and once again, talking about future chapties. Human Link + Midna = wow O.o;;;; Link's tool is probably half of Midna's size XD That's gonna be quite a challenge. For Midna, that is X3

and once again, and again about future chapties. For the Iza-Hena chapty, you could always add in the Zora girl who helps in the boat game, I mean, she works for them, no? Heck, you could always use one of the weak and helpless Zoras that you find after releasing Lanayru. I mean, they are already in position of taking some Link..... ok, that was lame, sorry.

Oh, and Ashei? Is the girl gonna get some luff? D= .............. something tells me she'd preffer girls, though >>;;;;;

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that's ok, that was all I had to say.... well, uh, update soon! or whenever you want! DX

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long review, no? X3