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for Storybook

by Ultima

person Anon
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it
person tjstreet
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic. Would love to read more.
person Aboutman
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story so far.

Please Continue.
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So there won't be anymore? :(

I would have liked to see more of what happened during the years before her mother was killed. The story moved very fast.

Still liked it tho, hope you write more.
person verbat
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm a big fan of your writing. This is my fav fic of yours.
person Anonymous
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hope you complete this if you ever write again.
person Anonymous
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved the story....a little short though :(
person Zfighter
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story you have here! :)
person vergil1
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Will there be anymore!? Loved this story.
person rynamite
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sad to hear your not writing. If you ever get into writing again a continuation would be great.

I understand it might be a hard story to continue considering the ending, perhaps the next chapter could be about something that happened between Mary and Arkham during this chapter. This chapter spans over years just choose an important event that happened during that time. (birthday or something of the like)

The next chapter should be like that.....a sequal wouldn't work as Mary left