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for Not afraid to die

by blackdiamondprincess

person Chikara
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww! I cried when he died! (Hey that rhymed!)

I love your writing! It inspires me to write.


~Chikara~
person Ri-chan
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh crap. I was cry though the whole dream. I mean BUCKETS OF TEARS. But good job.
person VII
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You had me seriuosly worried for a minute there!!!! -wipes face- great story..keep it up..

VII
person Anon
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
another story with the perfect amount of angst and love between riku and sora, can't wait for your next updates, happy holidays:)
person fayeS.
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for that good cry!!...I think...Anyways, it was saddeningly wonderful!! You definitely had me goin' there...it was sweet though! I loved the little:

Riku: "Sora, let's make love!"

Sora: "No."

Haha!! I can just imagine Sora's "WTF"/"Ummm...No..." look. LOL I had to like, pause and laugh at that! It must of seemed so random to Sora!! lol
person Fallen To the Slashy Side
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
T_T IT WAS BEAUTIFUL!!!
person Hikari
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omfg, nothing has made me cry like that since my mom died, and i mean NOTHING. awesome job and im glad it was all a dream! *glomp* X3
person AkuRokulover
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad it made me cry >< Also very well written though, I really enjoyed it ^_^
person Dark Light
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You had me crying and everything! Oh, my, this was so good! You kept me paying attention to every word and everything!! Oh!!!!!!
person Queenadreena
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YOU *points* You got me so sad whilst reading that, I'm still trying to get rid of this godawful lump in my throat! Well written with good description, so so glad that it was, in fact, all just a dream.