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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Truly an impresive piece of work. You paint a very detailed picture of the scenes, the characters, and the situation and their thoughts. I felt you portrayed Nel's feelings very much in character, and Claire's as well without being too overbearing or straying from the point of the story. Hope you'll continue writing, and I'm looking forward to seeing more.
Vocarin
Vocarin