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October 31, 2017 at 12:00 AM
I can see the mistress doing bdsm on both vanilla and cream and they happily obey there mistress with whatever sexual order they receive like for example do each other for her amusment with whatever the mistress gives them to use on each other. Please continue this if you can.
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just want to point out an inconsistency:
vamp told them that anyone who enters their world is forgotten by the ones from their own world. And, from what Blaze said about Amy and Rouge, I'm assuming they've been there longer than Cream.
Yet, she was able to name them off by name, even though she shouldn't know who they are.
vamp told them that anyone who enters their world is forgotten by the ones from their own world. And, from what Blaze said about Amy and Rouge, I'm assuming they've been there longer than Cream.
Yet, she was able to name them off by name, even though she shouldn't know who they are.
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
White space. Big blocks of text are scary to read, try to space them out a bit.
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December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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Apple cider..........
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Um, yeah, this is still kinda freaky, not as sexy as wtfery. Then again, my genre is WTF, so I'm hoping you could continue this, but don't be trying to push in on my territory.
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Right, okay then, I'll just be on my way now...
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Apple cider..........
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Um, yeah, this is still kinda freaky, not as sexy as wtfery. Then again, my genre is WTF, so I'm hoping you could continue this, but don't be trying to push in on my territory.
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Right, okay then, I'll just be on my way now...
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yet another great chapter by the ultimate Zakeroszwki. Keep up the good work.
This is S.M.F saying: Pwn rating: Sonic: 40/10, Mario 2/10.
This is S.M.F saying: Pwn rating: Sonic: 40/10, Mario 2/10.
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December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, this is certainly a peice of work, definatly someting that has to do with a thingy there, oh hell no, greek fire is definatly bad, i mean, uh, right, well, continue on, this thing is interesting enough to invest further attention.
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December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. It seemed a little fast, but who cares, it was good. I hope to read more soon.
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December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My word, I have never seen this kind of fanfic anywhere. I hope you can finish it, cause it looks like it will be good.
This is S.M.F saying: Man's building a base on the moon.
This is S.M.F saying: Man's building a base on the moon.