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for Invisible Wounds

by Minwax

person Sc00byD00
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love Leon as uke. He should be forced in some way to be the bitch of the relationship. Interesting pair too. First story I read with a reference to Gaiden. Update soon please!
person sugoi writingu
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My god, this is like one of the best things I've read. Good pairing! I didn't know about Gaiden, but thanks for the wiki entry! I think i want to play it now!
person anon2
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh honey no one is going to give you any cruel comments because you love christ like I do. Jesus loves me too. hehehehe
gay sex baby! Barry style since he's married. That's the best kind to corrupt.
person Drowning
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is beautiful! Never seen this pairing, but you made it so lovely...well done!
person anon
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow a Barry/Leon fanfic. that is a new one. :)
Good work so far,however, you need to watch your punctuation and flow. Otherwise its still a good job on the strange pairing.
How about tryiing out different pairings?