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December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Firstly, Your story is good. I don't know much about Starfox but I did care about the characters after reading your fic. I've rated it 4/5 so far.
Secondly, can you edit the periods at the end of chapter 2 because I think they are causing the page to stretch which isn't nice for reading.
Thirdly, Thanks for reviewing my story, I'll be definatley finishing off Hidden Joys. Too be honest, I'd love some more reviews. I can't check what rating/s(I've had five stars for a while) I have been getting for the story and I've had two reviews. You do seem to be at least getting some reviews so you can get some criticism and improve your work.
Most people seem to be using my story for a quick wank and that is it. I'm such a whore. :P
Secondly, can you edit the periods at the end of chapter 2 because I think they are causing the page to stretch which isn't nice for reading.
Thirdly, Thanks for reviewing my story, I'll be definatley finishing off Hidden Joys. Too be honest, I'd love some more reviews. I can't check what rating/s(I've had five stars for a while) I have been getting for the story and I've had two reviews. You do seem to be at least getting some reviews so you can get some criticism and improve your work.
Most people seem to be using my story for a quick wank and that is it. I'm such a whore. :P
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December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I usually don't like fics like these. I only read and reviewed this because DM told me to. I really didn't like this story, but hey, you've only got two chaps up. I'll come back and check on this later.
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December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty fun Ivan. Next time we'll go for a farther distance. Anyways, I must be off to do the things I do best.
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December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Nods head* Poor Orima. How could you do that Ivan? And I want my binoculars back!
This chapter is just as crazy as the first one. If not crazier. 4 out of 5.
By the way, forget what I said before. Do whatever you want with the Red Alert fic, just so long as it gets put up. mkay? So you like the Apocalype too eh? It's just too cool. And I figured that CrazyIvan would be one of your favorite soldiers. Obviously, that's where you got your penname from huh? And I too like his lines, like, "Happy Birthday!" XD
All in all, I give you a thumbs up. Have a nice day!
This chapter is just as crazy as the first one. If not crazier. 4 out of 5.
By the way, forget what I said before. Do whatever you want with the Red Alert fic, just so long as it gets put up. mkay? So you like the Apocalype too eh? It's just too cool. And I figured that CrazyIvan would be one of your favorite soldiers. Obviously, that's where you got your penname from huh? And I too like his lines, like, "Happy Birthday!" XD
All in all, I give you a thumbs up. Have a nice day!
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December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Me again...
Just telling you to take your time with the next one. And I see that you got quite a number of reviews, and its only been a couple of days. This fanfic may turn out good.
P.S: Nothing in this site is funnier than this fanfic. And i'm still hoping you get that 1000 hits ;)
Just telling you to take your time with the next one. And I see that you got quite a number of reviews, and its only been a couple of days. This fanfic may turn out good.
P.S: Nothing in this site is funnier than this fanfic. And i'm still hoping you get that 1000 hits ;)
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well thanks DM and Harely for the comments. As for thinking out the plot? I can try, but what started out as a serious fanfiction, went to hell and back through some random crazy assed shit. I still have the plot, and if you enjoy random zaniness, you'll love this. My favorite units in RA2, well, for the tank there is no choice but THE ALMIGHTY APOCALYPSE ATOMIC ASSAULT TANK!! And as for infantry, It is probably a tie between the desolater and CrazyIvan, they're both so cool, and have some wicked lines. "Happy birthday!" and "Don't play with matches!" and who can forget, "Where did I leave the bomb?" Lol, alrighty then, well, by this time I've made the reply long enough. I'll try and get those chapters typed soon, but I've basicly reached 0% zeal, I mean, writing 60 pages in two days? I'm fucking wiped. I'll pull it together somehow, and then get my shit together. Well, for now, this is CrazyIvan signing off, Sepher phi, carry on...
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yo!
You know, this is pretty damn funny! I read further chapters with anticipation! Looks like Charmee is gonna get a lot of abuse. 4 out of 5, and please do something funny with Shadow and Amy. Even if you have to get them both drunk.
You know, this is pretty damn funny! I read further chapters with anticipation! Looks like Charmee is gonna get a lot of abuse. 4 out of 5, and please do something funny with Shadow and Amy. Even if you have to get them both drunk.
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... okay. You go ahead and finish writing the RA fic. I'm anxiously awaiting it to appear here. By the way, what's your favorite Red Alert soldier? And tank? Mine are the Chrono Legionnaire and the Apocalypse tank.
Don't disappoint me either. Think your plot out, 'cause I don't want to read a crappy story. I wish you good luck, and a nice day.
Don't disappoint me either. Think your plot out, 'cause I don't want to read a crappy story. I wish you good luck, and a nice day.
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story seems like that it will turn out good. I have no questions here,but I cna tell you to keep up the good work, and take your time with the next one.
PS: I'm hoping you get 1000 hits for this fanfic ;)
PS: I'm hoping you get 1000 hits for this fanfic ;)
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You never cease to amaze me friend. Keep it up. One day when the world is ready, we will unleash our co-authored fan fiction. But untill then I'm just gonna sit on my ass and vegitate.