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Love the Full Metal Jacket reference there. That movie kicked ass.

Well then, what the hell are you doing? Go and get your work done! lol

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Alright Ivan. I'm going to rant a bit. I'm fine with you using my character and all but I degress...I'm not THAT random with my mood swings, crazy antics, and what not. And even though you have tons and tons of hilarious ideas for improving your chapters, you should just carry on with the story. Anyways, I really forgot what I was really ranting about. So in conclusion one plus one may equal one on a bun and two plus two may equal twenty-two, but...where am I going with this? Whatever, Orima is off to do the things he does best.

I just read the new 2 chapters.. now while they are really funny and pretty random.. I must say that it kinda gets hard to keep track of all the chaos and stuff XP

Sheesh, is it too much to ask for a few reviews? I mean gawd, I just put up two chapters! I'm almost never that motivated, and what do I get? That's right, the country of Pakistan. Besides that, I don't like ramen noodles, they get caught in my motopsycho spokes. Oh well, hopefully someone will get me some mroe reviews.
Also, I'd appreciate it if people would tell me what they though of some of the more WTF scenes, or anything else that really sticks out. If I know what gets people's attention, i can better write more stuff like it. Alright, for now, this is CrazyIvan, going around like a chicken with its left foot cut off. Semper phi, carry on...

Oh my God, I think it's disco.

DUDE?! Whwen are you starting back up? I can't wait to see the next chapter. MAKE SURE to get it done before the 3rd week...or whenever you fel like it.

Even though most people hate this kind of work, I still like it. Take your time with the next chapter, and try to do your best.
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Funkman you're a little girl, this story is good.

Hey now. No arguing over Ivan's story now. If you like it you like it and if you hate it you hate it. Generally, Ivan just doesn't care if someone out of hundreds of people hates his work, for he is Ivan. Anyways, I'm off again.