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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is so HOT! I love your sex scenes! They go from raunchy to romantic in a heartbeat, and it may be a little rough around the edges but I can still feel it in the pit of my stomach. Bravo to you!
Now... off to jump my man...
MEOW!
:)
~ pia Z ~
Now... off to jump my man...
MEOW!
:)
~ pia Z ~
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE SAPPY stories. PWP sappy ones are the best.
I love the way you write Ada, it shows that you really like her and I do too!
I love the way you write Ada, it shows that you really like her and I do too!
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it. You are a good writer of sex pwp lady of ada and leon pairings. Keep it going and I hope this nice and kind review will keep you going and not discourage you.
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December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like the way you write Ada, very impressive characterization of her bad ass female self.
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I dun like Leon/Ada fics, but this one is really good! ^_^ Great read!
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that is one of the best ada leon stories evahhhhh!
who cares about cheesy lovey dovey lines? This ROCKS!
This pairing is very underappreciated. Poor couple.
who cares about cheesy lovey dovey lines? This ROCKS!
This pairing is very underappreciated. Poor couple.
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sit your ass down now and start writing. You must not end this series. Besides, thick plots and intricacies make for better stories.
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
not bad but you need to work on your flow better. The dialogue is a little cheesy though. It's okay, because Re is capcom and capcom is usually cheesy.