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December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Maiafay.
I've never been much into stories with Pyramid Head sex, but there's something different about this one. Maybe it's the image of Maria doing most of the lovin', with PH being almost an afterthought. She and Heather make such a sexy pairing. Maybe it's also how the story seems almost like a dream, with its surreal events. Whatever the reason, I found myself sucked into it.
How about one with Heather and Lisa? Or Heather and Eileen? Maria and Cynthia? Whatever the pairing, I'm certainly curious for more. Nice job. ;)
I've never been much into stories with Pyramid Head sex, but there's something different about this one. Maybe it's the image of Maria doing most of the lovin', with PH being almost an afterthought. She and Heather make such a sexy pairing. Maybe it's also how the story seems almost like a dream, with its surreal events. Whatever the reason, I found myself sucked into it.
How about one with Heather and Lisa? Or Heather and Eileen? Maria and Cynthia? Whatever the pairing, I'm certainly curious for more. Nice job. ;)
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December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
@ Maiafay: Thanks much, I'll keep your comments in mind. I'm working on Chapter 3 now.
@ Jennifer: Thank you very much, I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter ^^
@ PyramidHead316: Thanks for the compliments. There's actually going to be a lot more Pyramid Head in Chapter 3. All good suggestions for stories.
@ Jennifer: Thank you very much, I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter ^^
@ PyramidHead316: Thanks for the compliments. There's actually going to be a lot more Pyramid Head in Chapter 3. All good suggestions for stories.
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December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think it's great, very shmexy and hawt. ^^;
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December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Again, very hot and sexy. ^^ And scary... all in one, kinda hard to pull off. Hehe.
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Strangely enough...I found this, erotic.
It was a guilty pleasure to read, completely uninhibited and nice flow of descriptions. You do need work on repetitive wording a bit, but a thesaurous can help you there. Aside from that, I enjoyed this...and am wondering when you will update again. Nice work!
It was a guilty pleasure to read, completely uninhibited and nice flow of descriptions. You do need work on repetitive wording a bit, but a thesaurous can help you there. Aside from that, I enjoyed this...and am wondering when you will update again. Nice work!