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January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, years AFTER this game, finally someone puts two and two together and we get an offical Canon pairing!
They really made a cute couple XD
They really made a cute couple XD
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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's interesting to say the lest. I would like to read more from you.
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sadly, you're not going to get many reviews for a Breath of Fire 4 fanfic here--even people who write fics for POPULAR games barely get any. So I'll do my part and make sure you get at least one.
This was good. It's short, but the small length definitely works to its advantage, serving to emphasize that this fic is more about a small moment of time of peace and perhaps love for these ill-fated two. The detail of the act is there, but never explicit, enough to tell the reader what's happening, but keeping the details down so that the emphasis can be put on the question of how and why. Grammatically flawless, or close enough to it. Overall, you did a very skillful job, and the result is a solidly good little story offering perhaps just a little more insight to both Mami and the ever-interesting character of Fou-Lu.
This was good. It's short, but the small length definitely works to its advantage, serving to emphasize that this fic is more about a small moment of time of peace and perhaps love for these ill-fated two. The detail of the act is there, but never explicit, enough to tell the reader what's happening, but keeping the details down so that the emphasis can be put on the question of how and why. Grammatically flawless, or close enough to it. Overall, you did a very skillful job, and the result is a solidly good little story offering perhaps just a little more insight to both Mami and the ever-interesting character of Fou-Lu.