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by firewolf

schedule March 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
really good luv Leon+Monsters <3
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... where to start. Love the Tyrants' point of view, especially how they call the humans 'little bosses' and 'little masters.'

I've read some of your other stuff, and I love how you characterize Krauser, and I love even more how you write Krauser/Leon, I can definitely say I'm a fan of this pairing now thanks to you.

The gang rape theme is at times a little much for me to take but I know I can always quit reading. The fact that I never do speaks volumes for your writing. I do feel so bad for poor Leon though.
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
arrghhh!!!

why can't more people write more krauser/leon fiction... this is an exceptional example, and i would definitely want to be hearing more of these from you, my man...

anyway...yep... keep up the great writing...
person Doomychan
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Such an amazing story..!

Poor Leon, but I loved how everything is resolved in the ending, no doubt about it.

I really love how your stories have so many Jack/Leon. I've never considered them as a couple until I've read your stories.

You are truly an awesome writer and this story makes me a Jack/Leon fan now.

Thanks. <3
person Monkey_Man
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that was a great fanfic...I love how you connected the story. I really enjoyed reading it. It was probably one of the few fanfics that I didn't get bored reading. Kudos to you ^^
person anon
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow lots of people like to write the B.O.W.S. with leon doing it. I saw another rape fic like this but yours is the first and better but your characterizations are off. I think it still works for this story.
person Anon
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I believe your Leon characterization was fine, however the Jack portrayal is OOC just as the reviewer above said.
Still the notion of the Tyrants and the rape was interesting. Very original.
person Sandraccoon
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story!!!!!!!!! Made me cry!


:'(


POOR LEON.

JACK WAS OOC BUT IN A GOOD WAY.

WRITE ANOTHER!
person Ennya
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, at last - a story to quench my Leon/Jack thirst. Splendidly well written and exciting to the very end. Well done.
person Mikie
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice work but you have some repetitive words that you didnt need.
Overall, the idea of Tyrants and Leon rape isn't original but the way you write it is original.