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Yes, me again. ^^ Go Mooni! You molest that warlock! O_O
Hehe, anyway. I'm really anxious to know what Vaithen has planned. *scratches chin* Oh, a little side note... I did like the scene where Vaithen snuck up behind her, and raised her head to look at him. However, night elves are about 7 feet tall... though it doesn't seem probable he'd be able to actually raise her head to look into her eyes, I could still see it happening. Ok, I'll stop babbling about a minor technicality. You! Keep writing, I want to know what happens next! *bows*

More please... This is getting really good ^_^

this is good plz continue

wow you really have to update this!!!!!!!!
I wonder what will happen to her

Well... I'm having some mixed feelings. I DO like the story for the most part, and the way it is written. Vaithen makes a great dominant character, I love the way he talks and uses his words to control Mooni. However, the only thing that I ~personally~ found odd was that Mooni was a virgin, and somehow manages to enjoy the forced sex. I know you hinted at her enjoying it despite this, and that she was denying her feelings and all, but it just seems to be a bit strange that a female would get her virginity taken from her (rather forcefully as well), bleeds from her nethers, and still likes it. Again, this is just a personal thing, coming from having read too many anatomically inaccurate stories. However! Yours is ten times more accurate than most stories I have read here, so kudos to that! In the end, I am looking forward to more chapters, and I do look to seeing Mooni receive some pleasure. :) (I mean, the kind where she is not trying to deny herself, hehe)

Great story. Very well done.

Great stuff.

Update.

Excellent stuff. Top notch.

oh please god continue this! really sexy!